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雅思写作大作文范文:解决环境问题的方法

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One of the best ways to solve the world's environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel and all vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?20180310真题)

 

翻译:解决世界环境问题的最好办法之一是提高燃料和所有车辆的价格。你在多大程度上同意或不同意?

 

话题:社会类-环境保护

 

类型:同意与否

 

关键词: environmental problemsincrease the cost of fuel and all vehicles

 

解析:

 

提高燃料和所有车辆价格一定是有一些帮助的,频繁大量的用车会产生有害气体(Cars are the main source of greenhouse gases and urban air pollution),汽车�的尾气排放积少成多,造成酸雨,全球气温变暖等等环境问题(Car exhaust contributes to acid rain and carbon dioxide which cause the global warming and damage human health.)

 

提价会在一定程度上减少人们的车辆使用,减少燃料消耗,减少有害气体排放,也就因此缓解了环境问题。

 

但是小编私认为,这并不能称得上是一个best way。首先,很多商家为了继续提高车辆售卖可能会努力寻找对付价格上升的方法(an alternative way to overcome the price rise);其次,很大程度上,这种提高价格,只会对一部分人产生影响,那些低收入者可能会感觉生活更困难(even harder to maintain their daily expenses)而对于中高收入群体,可能这一措施的影响不大,效果也并不明显;另外,除了有害气体排放,我们地球还面临着一些其他类型的污染问题(Chemical wastages and solid wastages are also hazardous to the environment.),而这些问题很难由提高燃油价格车辆价格来解决(These harms will not stop by increasing fuel prices.), 因此,这个措施可以在一定程度上解决问题(This system might be useful to a certain extent in some cases.),但很难被称之为一个one of the best ways

 

好啦,我们来看一看今天的精选范文

 

范文分析:

 

Environmental pollution has been a major concern in todays society, and some people feel that governments should raise the price of fuel (替换题目中词汇)to resolve this issue(注意词汇搭配-resolve a problem/resolve an issue. In my opinion, it may help to some extent; however there are other effective solutions to tackle this problem.

 

(开头段写的非常棒,结构上简洁明了,没有多余的话。背景介绍一句进行了词汇替换并使用了地道搭配, 引出下文一句给出了非常明确的自己的观点,就是我觉得它有些用途,但是可能还有其他更有效办法- 本文不是totally agree totally disagree,而是一种比较折中式的写法,大家可以仔细研读一下)

 

To begin with, increasing the price of petrol(题目中词汇替换fuel-petrol- 下层词替换上层词) can help reduce the environmental pollution to some degree. In other words, excessive use of cars(好词,过度使用-excessive use of sth.releases(环境话题好词,排放气体用release) carbon dioxide into the atmosphere which is detrimental todetrimental-..有害处,有害的,不利的) the environment. If the price of petrol is increased, individuals will start to use their cars less often and this in turn can decelerate(动词-使减速,降低速率,我们可以在说速度speed的时候使用表示减速,或者在说经济增长Economic growth的时候使用,表示经济发展放缓,反义词acceleratethe rate of air pollution. However, the increase in the cost of petrol will not continuously stop the environmental pollution. Besides, the fuel price determines the market prices of other essential commodities(名词:商品commodity-日用品= daily necessities)  and increasing the price can affect poor and middle class families.

 

(主体1段,讲明提价的作用,进行了具体的解释-解释论证,在结尾处进行了转折,说明虽然有效,但不会持续一直有效,并且还会提高省会必需品价格,影响中下层人们的日常生活。本段在具体的分析这个措施的利弊,注意标黄色的字体为句间连接词,本段的逻辑连接做的特别好,值得学习)

 

On the other hand, governments can take other measures to mitigate(使减轻,使缓和=alleviatethese problems. A better solution is to invest in renewable energy sources(环境话题好词-可再生能源) such as wind, solar and tide(积累一下做举例) rather than non-renewable resources like coal and petrol. For example, solar power in the United States has proven its efficiency in energy production.

 

Second, by improving public transportation and reducing the cost of traveling, the government can encourage more people to use public transport; this practice can help clean the environment and reduce traffic.

 

(主体2段,给出了一些作者认为可能更有效的方法,比如与其提价,不如花更多精力在可再生资源的开发商,与其给中下层人民带来生活消费增高的困扰,不如大力发展公共交通,政府会更有作为)

 

To conclude, I strongly believe that the hike in the petrol price is not the best solution to this problem. Improving the efficiency of public transport and investing in renewable energy sources are better alternatives(替代性方法) that ought to be considered.

 

(如果说开头段没有把自己的观点说的很明确,那么这个结尾就彻底把自己的观点说清楚了,有理有据,并对上文提到的替代性方法做了总结)

 

这篇范文写的真是太好了,小编真的是实在忍不住了,看到就要快点分享给大家。请大家务必好好学习,好好仿写这篇文章哦。


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