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  雅思作文题目:被处罚后继续犯罪的原因及解决办法,下面由新航道的沈阳雅思培训小编为您解答!


  Many criminals continue to commit crimes even after being punished for it. Why do you think this happens? How can we solve this problem?


  解析


  主题:犯罪


  题型:Report


  关键词:


  criminals continue to commit crimes   reasons   solutions


  需要讨论的观点:


  受到惩罚的罪犯继续犯罪,原因是什么,如何解决?


  建议思路:


  从物质、心理、社会三个层次分析原因,然后提出解决方案


  复制情况:古题


  读题


  这次考试的主题涉及犯罪,这是一个非常古老的问题,需要在2010年之前发生。唐先生多次提醒我们,对于“原因分析”这类话题,我们可以用“三个层次”的思路来处理,即“物质层次”、“心理层次”和“社会层次”。

 

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  为什么受到惩罚的人会继续犯罪?原因只有三个:


  1. 犯罪的人,即使出了牢房,往往也找不到工作,所以只能重操旧业。


  2. 牢房通常以更粗暴的方式对待罪犯,不仅不能从心理上处理罪犯的问题,而且让他们对社会产生不良的报复心理。


  3. 犯罪的人,往往很难得到社会的认可,不被社会容纳,所以很容易让他们再次走上犯罪的道路。


  解决办法:


  1. 改进监狱教育改造方法,让罪犯从心底再次热爱社会;


  2. 积极宣传出狱囚犯,让社会接受他们,为他们创造就业机会。


  雅思7分范文


  Research shows that globally more than 20% of criminals, the majority of whom are young adults, will revert to anti-social behaviour after being released from prison. There are, to my mind, three reasons why this happens.


  Many criminals find they simply cannot find a job to support themselves after being freed from prison. Having been secluded from the real world for a long while, they find themselves no longer needed by the world that changes on a daily basis. Then, without a choice, they have to steal, rob, or even kill people, just for survival’s sake.


  Another important reason has to do with the criminals’ experience in prison. Many criminals complain that they have received improper treatment while they are in prison. They are verbally abused, physically punished, and mentally despised. Consequently, when they go out of prison, what fills their heart is hatred, rather than love, for the world.


  Finally, most former criminals are not really accepted by the general society of mankind. Having biased views on them, people always try to avoid them, not to mention making friends with them, leaving them isolated from the rest of the world. Then, just like the beast in Frankenstein, they easily get involved in anti-social behaviour of various kinds.


  To prevent criminals from committing crimes again, the first and foremost thing that ought to be done is improving the quality and effectiveness of prison education which should be carried out with the aim to turning the prisoners into good people rather than victims of physical punishment. Then, perhaps more importantly, the general public should be made to understand that the former criminals also deserve the right of a good life. If the government and individuals alike tried their best to help the criminals by creating job opportunities for them and showing enough respect, I believe they would eventually come back to normal life and would not commit more crimes.   (321 words)


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