雅思写作高分技巧1：防止单词和短语空洞，下面由新航道的沈阳雅思培训小编为您介绍！

　　1. 一些空洞的单词或短语不能给句子带来任何相关或重要的信息，可以完全删除。例如，以下句子：

　　When all things are considered, young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents, in my opinion.

　　“在这句话中”when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都是多余的。完全可以去掉。改为：

　　Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents.

　　2. 可以替换一些空洞乏味的表达方式，如：

　　Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time.

　　“due to the fact that“这是一个典型的繁琐表达方式的例子，可以改变，简化为以下表达方式：

　　Be use our grandparents were obligated to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have now.

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　　雅思写作高分技巧二：避免重复

　　1. 尽量避免重复使用相同的单词。有时，虽然单词没有重复，但意思是重复的，然后你可以做一些简化的工作。例如：

　　The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size.

　　large 对于一个farm来说，就是size方面的large，所以in size可以去除，改为：

　　The farm my grandfather grew up on was large.

　　更简洁的表达方式如下：

　　My grandfather grew up on a large farm.

　　2. 有时一个短语可以用一个更简单的单词来替换，例如：

　　My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents' farm。

　　这里的over and over again可以改为repeatedly，显得更简洁：

　　My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents' farm.

　　雅思写作高分技巧三：选择最合适的句法结构

　　选择合适的句法结构可以使句子意思的表达更加准确和简洁。以下是考虑选择哪种句法结构时可以参考的原则:

　　1. 句子的主语和谓语动词应该能够反映句子中最重要的含义。例如：.

　　The situation that resulted in my grandfather's not being able to study engineering was that his father needed help on the farm.

　　从意义上分析，上述句子需要表达的重要概念是“grandfather's not being able to study”。

　　在表达这个概念时，原话中使用的主语是situation，谓语动词是was，不能强调需要表达的关键概念，可以改为以下句子:

　　My grandfather couldn't study engineering be use his father needed help on the farm.

　　2.防止经常使用“经常使用”there be“结构，如下面的句子：

　　There were 25 cows on the farm that my grandfather had to milk every day. It was hard work for my grandfather.

　　能够改成：

　　My grandfather worked hard. He had to milk 25 cows on the farm every day.

　　更简洁的句型为：

　　My grandfather worked hard milking 25 cows daily.

　　3.将从句改为句子或单词。例如：

　　Dairy cows were raised on the farm, which was lo ted100 kilometers from the nearest university and was in an area that was remote.

　　简介的表达方式如下：

　　The dairy farm was lo ted in a remote area, 100 kilometers to the nearest university.

　　4.只有在需要强调宾语而不是主语的时候才使用被动语态。例如：

　　In the fall, not only did the cows have to be milked, but also the hay was mowed and stacked by my grandfather's family.

　　这句话不够简洁的原因是这句话的重点应该是“忙碌的家庭”-my grandfather's family”。

　　使用被动语态后，重心似乎变成了cows和hay。以下表达方式为主动语态，相对简洁:

　　In the fall, my grandfather's family not only milked the cow but also mowed and stacked the hay.

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