在雅思大作文书写中，无论什么话题，什么类型的文章，大家都绕不开的一件事就是开头段首句「题目改写」

「题目改写」句子的重要性非常明显，不仅在篇章结构上具备引出话题的功能，更是考官在读我们文章时看到的第1句话，水平高低直观呈现

因此，题目改写句子写好非常的重要，小编今天就带大家来看看「题目改写」句子怎么写

改写方法

题目改写，顾名思义就是去对卷面上给出的题干进行paraphrasing，

那么paraphrasing-改写，都有哪些方法呢？

咱们先来看一个简单的例子：

Buying a house is very important。

这个句子我们就可以改写为：

Home ownership is of great importance for lots of people.

或者：It is of great importance for people to own a home.

在这个例子中，我们可以看到：

红色部分的修改为同义词的使用Use of synonyms

紫色部分的修改为词性上的修改，将形容词性变为了名词性transformation

横线部分的修改形式为从句型语法角度，进行了句型的转变Sentence restructuring

所以总结一下，题目改写，我们可以采取的三种方法，或者说是三个技巧为：

Use of synonyms

Transformation

Sentence restructuring

真题演练

那么接下来我们就来拿一道真题来进行一下演练

Unemployment is one of the most serious problems facing developed nations today.Some argue that a 35-hour working week is a possible solution to unemployment.

What are the advantages and disadvantages of this solution?

题目翻译：

失业是当今发达国家面临的最严重问题之一。一些人认为，将每周工作时常减少至35小时是解决失业问题的可行办法。

你认为此解决方案的优点和缺点是什么？

我们来一起进行一下这个题目的改写

第1步：我们可以把题目中关键的名词/动词都划出来

Unemployment is one of the most serious problems facing developed nations today.Some argue that a 35-hour working week is a possible solution to unemployment.

What are the advantages and disadvantages of this solution?

接下来我们来思考一下，这些名词有什么同义词synonyms

unemployment=lack of jobs

serious problems=critical issues

developed nations=industrialized countries

advantages and/or disadvantages=pros and/or cons

working week=professional schedule

Facing=confronting

第二步：我们来观察有哪些词可以进行词性转变与替换：

Unemployment is one of the most serious problems facing developed nations today.Some argue that a 35-hour working week is a possible solution to unemployment.

What are the advantages and disadvantages of this solution?

可以替换成的其他表述方式

facing=among

(one of the most serious problems facing developed nations=a major concern among many industrialized countries)

solution=can be done

第三步：我们来看从句型语法角度来讲，句子是否可以进行一些调整restructuring

Unemployment is one of the most serious problems facing developed nations today.Some argue that a 35-hour working week is a possible solution to unemployment.

What are the advantages and disadvantages of this solution?

我们经常在高分范文中看到，言简意赅的高分开头往往只有2-3句话，没有任何冗余成分，非常「干练」

在今天这个题目中我们就可以把第二句和第三句题目句子进行合并，可以看到第三句话也就是问题中的this solution就是指代上一句中提到的缩减工时到35个小时：

In this essay,I will outline the pros and/or cons of lessening professional schedules to thirty-five hours。

以上我们将三个步骤中的内容结合在一起，一个开头段就写出来了：

Lack of jobs is indeed a major concern among many industrialized countries.In this essay,I will outline the pros and/or cons of lessening professional schedules to thirty-five hours.

以上，多多练习哦