2023年10月17日雅思作文题目：提高高脂食品价格？下面由新航道的沈阳雅思培训小编为您解答！

　　10月17日雅思作文示范写作

　　Moreandmorepeoplearebecomingseriouslyoverweight.Somepeoplesaythatraisingthepriceoffatteningfoodwillsolvethisproblem.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?

　　范文及解析

　　Introduction

　　Aconundrumofmodernsocietiesisthedeclininglevelofhealthinthegeneralpopulation,suchascorpulence,withconflictingviewsonhowtotacklethisworryingtrend.Onepossibleremedyistoincreasethepriceoffatteningfoodtoencourageahealthierdiet.

　　[分析]题目与新剑16的题目非常相似

　　conundrumn.难题

　　corpulencen.肥胖，臃肿

　　ConcessionRefutation

　　Admittedly,suchpracticecouldtosomeextentalleviatethetension.Advocatesofthissolutiondeemthattoday’sprevalentfooddeliveryservicesandeasy-to-reachoilyfoodmeanthatdietbeverageandfoodarenolongerpartofsomecitizens’lives.Ifthepriceofsuchhigh-caloriefoodwasraised,thegeneralpublicwholiveonatightbudgetwouldbemorelikelytoconsumecheaperyetlow-fatalternatives,ratherthanjustcollapseinfrontofscreeneveryevening,withfriedchickenandcolainhand.However,suchmeasurefailstouproottheproblem,sincetherelativelyrichmaynotbeacutetotheraisingprice.

　　虽然题目乍一看没有像only、best这样的常规极端词，但是solve这个动词需要猜测:真的能“根除”这个问题吗？还是只是“减少”？这将是我们的切入点。

　　alleviatevt.减轻

　　easy-to-reachadj.容易获得的

　　dietadj.低脂肪，少糖

　　uprootvt.根除

　　Argument

　　Asamatteroffact,theremaybebetterwaysoftacklingthiscrisis.Inmostcases,excessiveintakeofunhealthyfoodcanbeascribedtopeople’sabsenceofawarenessofhowmuchoilandfatthoseproductscontain.Inotherwords,hardlydoconsumershaveaclearunderstandingofthenutrientslistedonthepackageandthusneglecttherepercussionsofover-adsorption.Inthissense,sometalksshouldbeavailablebothonlineandoff-linetoinformcitizensaboutthefunctionofingredientlabels.//Besides,hightaxpenaltiescouldbeimposedonhigh-fatfoodproducts,whereasawardscouldbebestoweduponhealthyones.Hence,morebusinesseswouldbemotivatedtodevelopandproducedietfoodproducts.

　　[分析]提出其他更有效、更“根除”这个问题的方法

　　intaken.摄取

　　penaltyn.处罚

　　bestowsth.uponsb.给某人某物

　　Conclusion

　　Torecapitulate,raisingthepriceistoonarrowanapproachandwouldnothavethedesirableresults.Notonlyshouldconsumersarousetheirawarenessofstudyingthenutrientlistsprintedonpackages,butfoodcompaniesshouldinvesthealthierproductsaswell.

　　[分析]重申观点

　　recapitulatev.总结

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