托福独立写真题范文

　　2024年9月1日单独写作题目：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is much easier nowadays for people to maintain health than in the past.

　　[陈年老题，age like fine wine 】

　　写作范文

　　Introduction

　　句子包含暗示：In the past, when people led austere lives, it may have been easy to maintain health. 然后，转折点引出了自己的立场：Today, although lifestyle has become exciting, keeping healthy is not made difficult and instead a lot easier.

　　妥协让我们看起来更加理性和可接受：

　　Admittedly, the lifestyle in the present time may be unfavorable to the maintenance of health. For example, indulged in today’s diverse entertainment, many people do not have enough time to have proper rest. 举个例子：This is the case with some of my friends, who Karaoke the club through the night on almost every Friday and Saturday, and wake up next day drunk and dizzy. They, at a young age, suffer from sub-health and a number of conditions because of irresponsible drinking and sleep deprivation. This would not happen decades ago when my parents were in their twenties or thirties.

　　论证和论证，把所有的观点都写在一段中，非常大胆的写作方法，不要害怕:

　　However, this behavior may be their personal choice, and the actual case with more people is that they lead a healthy life. They eat following nutritionists’ advice, make good use of their healthcare, sleep early and exercise frequently, and spend time in their personal pursuits; in brief, they have strong awareness of keeping fit and maintaining health. All of these are credited to the many advantages of today’s society. There now are the experts of nutrition; there now is sophisticated healthcare. The more democratic workplace culture today allows people to be completely offline from work and to leave the after-work hours all for themselves. This is the privilege today’s society provides, and the privilege my parents’ generation would not even wish for. They eat whatever that was available; they did not have the advanced medical care or nutritional advice; they could not go to bed without thinking about what happened at work or what would happen, because their superiors expected them to be more dedicated, more than they already were, to their jobs, and would expect so much of their performance the next day. Thanks to today’s society, people now have so many more favorable conditions in maintaining health.

　　是的，论证结束了，不要慌，解释清楚就可以了。

　　Conclusion

　　结尾的内容需要笼统，没有细节，可以覆盖主体部分的核心和主要论点:

　　Decades ago, life was simple; however, it might have been too simple for people to maintain health. It was also unfortunate that the work ethics were not really health-friendly. By contrast, the maintenance of people’s wellbeing, of the body and of the mind, is made a lot easier by the many improvements of society, and the minority group of people who live their lives irresponsibly should not be taken in account.

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