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　　2托福写作句子的装饰技巧排比：对称结构

　　Despitealltheevidence,expertscontinuetodebateweatherglobalwarmingexists,howextensivetheproblemis,whatthelikelyeffectswillbeandwhetheranyremedyispossible.

　　Despitealltheevidence,expertscontinuetodebatetheexistenceofglobalwarming,theextentoftheproblem,itslikelyeffectsandanypossibleremedy.

　　2.描述托福写作句子的装饰技巧。

　　（1）明喻：出现比喻词：as,like,asif…

　　Inmanyways,nodoubt,ourworldgrowsmoreandmorecomplex,sputnikscannotbesimple;yethowmanyofourcomplexitiesremainfutile,howmanyofourartificialitiesfalse.Simplicitytoocanbesubtle-asthestraightlinesofaGreektemple,liketheParthenonatAthens,aredelicatelycurvedinordertolookstraighterstill.

　　（2）隐喻：比喻词不出现。

　　AmericahasgiventheNegropeopleabadcheck,whichhascomebackmarkedinsufficientfunds.

　　3.对比：加深记忆

　　Extremismindefenseoflibertyisnovice;moderationisthepursuitofjusticeisnovirtue.

　　4.比较

　　TheNegrohasacallusgrowingonhissoulanditisgettingharderandhardertohurthimhere.Thatisasimplelawofnature.Likeacallusonthefootinashoethatistootight.Thefootisnature’sandthatshoewasputonbyman.Thetightshoewillpinchyourfootandmakeyouhollerandscream.Butsoonerorlater,ifyoudonottaketheshoeoff,acalluswillformonthefootandbegintowearouttheshoe.

　　ItisthesamewiththeNegroinAmerica.Thatshoe-thewhiteman’ssystem—haspinchedandrubbedandsqueezedhissouluntilithasalmostdestroyedhim.Butitdidnot.Andhowacallushasformedonhissoul,andunlessthatsystemisadjustedtofithim,too,thatcallusisgoingtowearourthatsystem.

　　5.拟人化

　　Dawnwasbeginningtoprowlabouttheskyandputoutthestarts.

　　6.夸张

　　Forshewasbeautiful—herbeautymadethebrightworlddim,andeverythingbesideseemedlikethefleetingimageofashade.

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