托福写作:如何利用句法结构丰富作文内容?下面由新航道的沈阳托福培训小编为您解答!
1.句子的主语和谓语动词应能反映句子中最重要的含义。例如:
Thesituationthatresultedinmygrandfather’snotbeingabletostudyengineeringwasthathisfatherneededhelponthefarm.
从意义上分析,上述句子需要表达的重要概念是“grandfather’snotbeingabletostudy“,但在表达这个概念时,原话中使用的主语是situation,谓语动词是was,不能强调需要表达的关键概念,可以改为以下句子:
Mygrandfathercouldn’tstudyengineeringbecausehisfatherneededhelponthefarm.
2.防止经常使用“经常使用”therebe“结构,如下面的句子:
提helowsowshathathathelady.Itwashardworkformygrandfather.
能够改成:Mygrandfatherworkedhard.hetomilowowsowsowery.
更简单的句型为:
在截图的oword.
3.将从句改为句子或单词。例如:
Dairycowswereraisedonthefarm,waslowated100kilometerstiastianatwatwatiatiathathatelowateleth.
简介的表达形式如下:
Thedairyfarmwaslocatedinaremotearea,在terstoterestoteresteresterestitity.
4.只有在需要强调宾语而不是主语的时候才使用被动语态。例如:
Inthefall,notonlydidthecowshavetobemilked,butalsothehaywasmowedandstackedbymygrandfather’sfamily.
这句话不够简单的原因是这句话的重点应该是“忙碌的家庭”-mygrandfather’sfamily使用被动语态后,重心似乎变成了cows和hay。下面的表达形式是主动语态,相对简洁:
Inthefall,mygrandfather’sfamilynotonlymilkedthecowbutalsomowedandstackedthehay.
5.用更准确的动词代替动词短语,如以下句子:
Mygrandfatherdidn’thavetimetostandarounddoingnothingwithhisschoolfriends.
Standarondoingnothing实际上可以用一个动词来表达,即loiterondoing:
Mygrandfatherdidn’thavetimetoloiterwithhisschoolfriends.
6.有时两句话的信息可以用一句话简单地表达出来,比如:
Profitsfromthefarmwerenotlarge.Sometimestheyweretoosmalltomeettheexpensesofrunningafarm.Theywerenotsufficienttopayforauniversitydegree.
两句话的信息可以合并为以下更简单的句子:
Profitsfromthefarmweresometimestoosmalltomeetoperationalexpenses,letalonepayforauniversitydegree.
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