阅读问题是托福写作的关键点。许多学生只关注基本材料的积累,但对于阅读问题的优势,针对性的培训相对较少,所以他们在考试阅读问题中失分。下面由新航道的沈阳托福培训小编为您解答!
例1:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Advertising is the only main cause for people's unhealthy eating habits.
看到这个话题,同学们会立刻开始想,有没有other? reasons for unhealthy habits,想到三个,如:1. People's tight schedules do not allow them to eat at regular hours; 2. Sometimes people are eager to lose weight or to keep fit so that they go on "endless diets"; 3. Bearing heavy burden both physically and mentally, some consider eating constantly as their most effective stress reliever. 综上所述,advertising is not the only cause.
这种写作方法看起来很完美,但实际上犯了一个微不足道但严重的错误——标题不是要求我们确认it is not the only cause,相反,我们必须证明it is not the only main cause。多一个"main“,意思很不一样。假如我们只需要确认it is not the only cause,然后找到other causes可以是例1中的写法。但是,如果我们想确认it, is not the only main cause,需要证明other causesthatwementionedarealsomain causes,这就需要在每一段中加入一些特别的表示。或者,更简单的方法是证明advertising is not even a cause, 直接从每段末尾加上advertising与本段所讨论的unhealthy eating habit无关的解释就可以了。If it is not a cause, how can it be the onlymain cause? 这样,就不需要证实还有其他的main cause来反驳,事实上,证实某种cause是main cause还是挺难的,所以笔者建议同学们用后一种方式来阐述。因此,文章还是disagree,而三段的主题句应该是:1、1. People's tight schedules do not allow them to eat at regular hours, and it is obvious that they are too busy to be influenced by advertising; 2. Sometimes people are eager to lose weight or to keep fit so that they go on "endless diets", and this is more like a result of human nature, the pursuit of beauty, but not advertising; 3. Bearing heavy burden both physically and mentally, some consider eating constantly as their most effective stress reliever, and it is quite clear that no advertising encourages them to do so.
托福写作读题误区
例2:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Colleges and universities should offer more preparation for student before they start working.
看到这个话题,很多学生可能会这样写:Agree. 1. Students should take morespecializedcourses(专业课)in order to be knowledgeable and skillful enough for their future careers然后开始阐述being knowledgeable and skillful的重要性); 2.Participating in internships helps students to have a clearer picture of their vocational development in the future(然后开始阐述,如果没有实习,在工作中是多么的感觉 so unprepared); 3. Attending more club activities is an effective way to improve social skills, which are crucial for success both in life and at work(然后开始解释goodgood social skills协助职业和生活).假如不看括弧内容,只看主题句,这篇文章是没有问题的。然而,从严格意义上讲,括弧中的阐述不能支持“more“这个关键词。然而,从严格意义上讲,括弧中的阐述不能支持“more“这个关键词。举个简单的例子:“我们应该有钱”和“我们需要很多钱”在证明的时候有不同的重点。如果确认“我们应该有钱”,应该详细说明
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