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托福写作用词怎么用才地道?

作者:沈阳新航道 2024-04-24 10:18
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  有人开玩笑说,外国人眼中的句子分为三个层次,最差的是主动句,最好的是被动句、倒装句等。,而nominalization(名词化)的句子,这是最学术、最适合写论文的句子。所以面对这样的差异,我们应该重新审视托福写作中的思维方式,这样才不会“画蛇添足”。下面由新航道的沈阳托福培训小编为您解答!


  简单地说,名词化是指用于名词的动词或修饰词。例如,动词转换为名词:discovery->discovery,  move->movement, refuse->refusal,另一个例子是将修饰词转化名词:careless->carelessness,  difficult->difficulty, intense->intensity。那么在什么情况下,我们需要名词化呢?


  A 谓语动词的宾语部分


  原话:I do not know either what she meant or what he intends.


  名词化:I do not know either her meaning or his intentions.

 

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  B 与被动形式相结合


  原话:If people decide without enough persuasive information...


  名词化:If a decision is made without enough persuasive information...


  C 替代品,如从句“the fact that”的用法


  原话:The fact that I denied what he accused me of impressed the jury.


  名词化:My denial of his accusations impressed the jury.


  更好的名词化:a. When I denied his accusations, I impressed the jury.


  b. In denying his accusations, I impressed the jury.


  D 名词化部分用于therere is/are后面


  原话:We demand that the government stop taxing entertainment.


  名词化:There is a demand for an end to taxation on entertainment.


  原话:The floods considerably eroded the land.


  名词化:There was considerable erosion of the land from the floods.


  然而,有时,当外国人认为在准备新托福写作时理所当然地使用“名词”时,他们认为这是没有必要的。例如:


  A 跟随动词后面的名词化部分


  原话(名词化“冗余”):The police conducted an investigation into the matter.


  改后:The police investigated the matter.


  B 名词化部分作为主语


  原话:Our discussion is concerned with a tax cut.


  改后:We discussed a tax cut.


  C 连续进行名词化


  原话:a. First, she reviewed the evolution of the dorsal fin.


  b. There was a first a review of the evolution of the dorsal fin.


  改后:First, she reviewed how the dorsal fin evolved.


  D 连接部分名词化


  原话:Their cessation of hostilities was because of their personnel  losses.


  改后:They ceased hostilities because they lost personnel.


  原话:The instability of the motor housing did not preclude the completion of  the field trials.


  改后:Even though the motor housing was unstable, the research staff completed  the field trials.


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