托福写干货，妥协怎么写？Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?下面由新航道的沈阳托福培训小编为您解答！

　　Moviesandtelevisionhavemorenegativeeffectsthanpositiveeffectsonthe way young people behave.

　　Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.

　　本文立场：缺陷大于优势

　　Admittedly, mass media do have their bright sides. For instance, Sesame Street, one educational TV program in the U.S., which was once very popular among children. The young people can learn various scientific knowledge and discoveries in it. What’s more, the characters are very entertaining and humorous, which make children love it even more. →与关键词关系不强

　　这个练习在妥协段的开头使用了正确的连接词和思路，但是进入阐述的部分并没有抓住题目中的标题 way young people behave这个关键词，所以本文中出现了跑题的问题。

　　修改版：

　　Admittedly, mass media do have their bright sides. For instance, Sesame Street, one educational TV program in the U.S., which was once very popular among children. By being imparted the scientific knowledge and discoveries in an entertaining way, most children who watch the program will be more desperate to learn anything about the unknown world by themselves or with peers.[对应文章中的关键词：the way young people behave/举例论证]However, from my perspective, given the current situation, the dark sides of media definitely outrun the bright ones.[反驳仍考虑文章主题]

　　那么，除了举例，妥协还能用其他方式写吗？推理方法也可以，那我们来看看推理版的妥协段。

　　讲理版：

　　Admittedly, mass media do have their bright sides. After being delicately designed, many protagonists in movies and television would have positive attitude and marvelous abilities. Also, they are set to save the world by conquering with the evil and would get the happy ending. Through such kind of programs, the youth can form a positive value about the world like great power means great responsibility or justice is invincible.[说理论证]However, 此处省略！

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