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托福写作真题高分范文欣赏

作者:沈阳新航道 2024-09-14 10:41
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  托福写作的准备离不开对大量高分范文的参考学习,尤其是以往考试中实际出现的一些题目,往往会在以后的考试中重复出现。因此,学习这些题目的写作思路和高分范文对学生会有很大的帮助。


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  托福独立写作真题思路分析


  题目:Rather than help their children with schoolwork, parents should help their children to work independently.


  思维分析:阅读问题后,我们会发现这个问题是一个“是否应该”的问题。作者建议使用最简单的“总分总结构”来写作。首先,提出自己的想法,即父母应该帮助孩子独立完成家庭作业。然后,讨论了两个原因,即更好地掌握知识,培养解决单独问题的能力,最后总结。

 

 


  托福写作真题高分范文


  In current society, according to the survey conducted by a newspaper titled China Daily, the study burden on the shoulder of students is increasingly heavier, which has attracted widespread public attention. When it come to what parents can do to help their children’s study, many people, if not most, are strong believers of the claim that parents should finish their kids’ homework for the purpose of relieving the study pressure. However, as far as I am concerned, parents are supposed to guide their children to complete their homework independently, for having a better command of knowledge imparted in class and cultivating their independent thinking ability.


  First and foremost, it is undeniable that finishing homework by themselves can help children better absorb the knowledge they obtained. As is known to all, the purpose of assigning homework to students is to review what they learned in the class. In other words, teachers will view their assignments as a yardstick to evaluate how well their students have absorbed the knowledge. For example, a history teacher may require his students to write a paper about the Independence War after briefly introducing the background and process of this war. Due to the lack of sufficient information about this subject, kids may turn to their parents for help. Some parents may do everything for their children, including collecting data, outlining the whole article and even finishing the paper. However, other parents may just provide some information sources and ask their kid to select relevant information and design the structure of the article. After finishing the paper, those who finish it independently have understood the whole process of Independent War, while those who do not complete by themselves forget what they learned quickly.


  Furthermore, it is indisputable that doing assignment independently can foster children’s ability of solving problems on their own, which is of great importance to their future success in their work and college study. The childhood is a critical period in which children shape characteristics or personalities. If a kid is accustomed to seeking helping from others whenever they encountered setbacks or troubles, he is likely to become emotionally attached to others and will n

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