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单独写作题目:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Primary school students (aged 5-10) should do no more than 30 minutes of homework per night because they already get enough instructions at school during the day.
写作范文
[思路]“够了”。因为:
1、孩子的大脑不能应付太多的作业;
二、不能让工作打击孩子的学习兴趣和意愿;
第三,老师也应付不了那么多需要批改的作业。
Introduction
1、我在讨论什么(话题)。
2、我在这个话题上的立场是什么?
只要达到这两个目的,就不要拖沓。
Although homework is necessary as it is to make sure that child students revisit things taught in the class, the load should be within a small amount. The proposition that the amount should not exceed 30 minutes of work is logical and adoptable.
First, a child’s mind is unable to deal with homework that takes a long time. [接下来,要不要解释,要不要举例,要不同时解释和举例。如果同时解释和举例,则没有顺序。在这一点上,最好用解释来论证。]Children usually have short attention spans. If the assignments require a long span of focus, children will get absent-minded and, as a result, learn nothing. In addition, although children may be forced to concentrate and manage to do so, they will get tired, and fatigue does not promote learning and instead inhibits it. [下一个例子吗?其实不能举例,因为解释够清楚了。]
Homework is not to make children suffer but to encourage children to experience what they learn. If the load is heavy and the time is lengthy, child students’ interest in learning and patience will wear thin and eventually wear off. For instance, [完全可以描述个人经历,不要编纂Tom或Jerry。]when I was in the elementary school, the math teacher always assigned too much homework to the students. As a matter of fact, the large amounts were not useful in strengthening my numeracy skills but counterproductive. Doing the work was like a torture, and with my interest in the subject lost soon, I failed in math. In fact, I have since been weak in counting and calculating.
[第三点,这里有一点。我们改用互动的方式:感兴趣的读者可以尝试在留言区发送自己的写作,作者会给出评价。]
There is no denying that homework is necessary because child students need to reflect on their learning—the successes and deficiencies—during the day. However, the amount must be reasonable and small, and the length of 30 minutes may be just fine.
Conclusion可以是introduction的改写。
不要过度重复主体部分已经解释清楚细致的内容。
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