在大部分考鸭准备雅思小作文的过程中,经常会忽略流程的重要性。如果在考场上出现流程图,考生都会抱有放弃的心态。这篇文章以剑15T3为例,分析一下流程图的写作思路。
一.词汇:
Storage silos 储料筒仓
Flour 面粉
Dough 面团
Dough sheet 面片
Dough strips 面条
Noodle discs 面盘
Vegetables and spices 蔬菜和调料
Labelling and sealing 标签和密封
二.中文思路:
方便面的生产主要是面饼的制作以及包装两部分,具体需要八个步骤。进货到的面粉储存在 storage silos(筒仓),生产方便面时,首先在 mixer(搅拌机)里混合面粉、水和油,混合后得到的面团被 roller(滚筒)压成 dough sheets(面片),然后 dough sheet再被切成 dough strips(面条)。切好的 dough strips 被放到 noodles discs里压成面饼,接着下锅油炸+烘干等待包装。方便面的包装使用的是cups,里面放入 面饼、 vegetables和 spices(蔬菜和调料)。最后在杯子上打上标签并塑封,方便面就生产出来了。
三.句型及思路汇总
1. 开头段只需要改写题目,适合使用The flow chart illustrates the procedure and equipment of.............
2. 分段可以按照阶段进行,即生产面饼一段,制作方便面一段,贴标签和密封一段。
3. 注意过渡词的使用。例如in the first stage, following this step, entering the final phase.
4. 句型使用:分词做伴随状语,where及which引导的非限制定语从句,after 引导的时间状语从句。
5. 结尾段:描述整个流程图共有几步,始于。。。。,终于。。。。。。
四.参考范文
Introduction:
The chart is an illustration of the procedure and equipment of making instant noodles.
Body1:
Instant noodles start in storage silos where the flour is kept. The flour is transported along with water and oil to a mixer to roll dough sheets on rollers, which is the beginning of the assembling phase. The dough sheets are cut into strips and then formed into compact ‘noodle discs. Following this step, the discs are fried in oil and left to dry, which is ready to be placed in cups with assorted vegetables and spices.
Body2:
Entering the final phase, noodles cups are labeled and sealed before they are transported into markets.
Conclusion:
Overall, producing instant noodles, as shown in the diagram, involves storage of raw materials, processing dry noodles, cooking and packaging.