雅思写作大作文思路监狱与改造Prisons and rehabilitation

今天我们雅思写作大作文的文章来研究下犯罪类话题下监狱与改造的问题。监狱在我们大多数人看来是一种惩罚手段，按说犯罪分子在监狱服完刑之后就赎了自己的罪。但是，许多人之后又重新回到犯罪的道路上。因此，改造(rehabilitation)慢慢被更多人重视起来。今天小编就为大家提供一些这方面的思路和素材。

监狱作为惩罚手段Prisons as punishments

Fines are used as punishment for minor crimes

罚款通常备用于惩罚轻微犯罪行为。

If the crime is more serious,prison is the most common punishment

如果罪行更为严重，监狱是最常见的惩罚手段。

Some criminals pose a threat to society

一些犯罪分子对社会造成威胁。

They are put in prison to ensure the safety of other citizens

他们被投入监狱，以保证其他市民的安全。

监狱的缺陷Negatives of Prisons

Criminals are put together.This article is from Laokaoya website.

罪犯被关在一起

They make friends with other offenders

他们与其他违法者交朋友

Many prisoners re-offend when they are released

许多囚犯在被释放之后再次犯罪

A criminal record makes finding a job more difficult

犯罪记录是找工作变得更为困难

改造Rehabilitation

Another aim of prisons is rehabilitation

监狱的另外一个目的是改造

Prisoners receive an education of vocational training

囚犯接受职业培训的相关教育

Prisoners should learn personal skills and specific job skills

囚犯应该学习个人技能和特定的工作技能

Punishment could make prisoners’behavior worse

惩罚只会使囚犯的行为变得更坏

Rehabilitation aims to make them better citizens

改造致力于使他们变成良好的市民

Rehabilitated prisoners are less likely to re-offend

改造后的囚犯再次犯罪的可能性比较小