雅思G类书信写作范文 给大学杂志写信为餐厅提建议

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

你需要花费二十分钟的时间在这个任务上

Write a letter to the college magazine.In your letter

给大学的杂志社写一封信，在信件中，

explain what you like about the cafeteria

解释你喜欢自助餐厅的哪些点

say what is wrong with it

谈谈哪些地方不太好

suggest how it could be improved

给些可以提高的建议

You should write at least 150 words.

书写不低于一百五十个词

You do NOT need to write any addresses.你不需要写任何地址

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear………,

参考范文(建议对着题目要求先写自己练习一遍，然后再参考范文学习)：

Dear Ms Margaret,

I have decided to write this letter to inform you of a few personal ideas that I have about our college cafeteria.As a regular customer,I would like to take the opportunity to express my gratitude to the people behind this cafe and I also believe some improvements would make it even more attractive.I am hoping that you would publish my ideas in your college magazine.

我决定写此封信件来为我们校园餐厅提出一些个人的看法。作为一个常客，我想借此机会向自助餐馆背后的人们表达感谢，我同时也觉得一些地方可以改进变得加有吸引力。我希望您能将我的看法发表到校园杂志上。

I personally feel that our college cafeteria has a great environment and offers delicious and healthy food.This article is from Laokaoya website.I appreciate the hard work of all the chefs and management for their attempt to serve meals to the students who are sometimes fussy and hard to please.The management is in fact,doing an excellent job.

我跟人觉得我们校园的自助餐厅环境非常棒，同时也提供了很美味健康的食物。我非常感谢餐馆的厨师和管理人员的为了给学生们提供食物而付出的辛勤劳动，有时候学生们还很挑剔，难以取悦。事实上，管理层的工作做得非常好。

However,many students,including I,feel that the food served in the cafeteria is expensive.Our canteen charges$15-$20 for lunch and this is considerably higher.A few other college canteens in our city charges less than that.

不过，很多学生，包括我，觉得自助餐厅提供的食物价格有些贵。我们的餐厅针对午餐收取十五到二十刀的费用，这相当高了。我们城市的一些学院餐厅收费比这个少。

It appears that students will soon make an inevitable choice to eat outside the campus due to the high price.As an individual who would love to continue eating fantastic food at our central eatery,I would like to suggest you publish an article about this issue.I hope this will help the canteen management become aware of how we think about their food price.

这样看起来学生们由于觉得价格高不久就会不得不选择去校园外面就餐。我作为一个喜欢在我们中心餐馆继续享受美食的个人来说，我想建议您能针对这件事情发表一篇文章。我希望这能够帮助餐厅管理层更加意识到我们对事物价格的看法。

If you have any further questions about this,please let me know.

如果你有任何问题，请告诉我。

Yours faithfully,

Kay Lim

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