雅思口语part2话题卡：Describe a person who encouraged and helped you to achieve a goal 描述一个助你实现目标的人/鼓励你的人

思路点拨：以下思路仅供参考，希望大家根据自己的真实经历编写答案

这道题目很有意思的地方在于你需要想到一个实际可行的目标并且完成了这个目标。因此，考生们在思考此题的时候，可以在脑海中自动过滤掉那些漫无边际以及还未完成的‘远大理想’等等。那么哪些目标可以说一说呢?可以是short-term goal(短期目标)也可以是一个long-term goal(长远目标)。比如，完成本学期的功课，争取考到班上前3名。也可以是生活中的，比如一个月内减肥15斤;通过交通考试，拿到驾照;还比如，攒好钱去一次理想的长途旅行等等。这些目标都可以有机会得到身边朋友或者老师的帮助，也不是mission impossible的事情。最后，小编要提醒大家的是，不管想说哪种事情，请一定在语言上多花些功夫，尽量表述无误。

题目

Describe a person who encouraged and helped you to achieve a goal

You should say:

who this person is

what this person encouraged you to do

how this person helped you

And explain why this encouragement helped you to achieve your goal

参考答案

下面给小编根据具体的题目要求，给出的参考答案：

A person who encouraged and helped me to reach a goal is Xiao Xiao, who is my older sister in my family.

一位帮助我实现目标的人是Xiao Xiao, 她是我家里的姐姐。

Xiao is eight years older than me. She is now working in the PricewaterhouseCoopers, which is one of the biggest corporations from the United Kingdom. She is hardworking and always makes people feel that she is energetic every day even though there’s much workload for her.

Xiao大我八岁。她现在普华永道工作，是英国的一家大型企业之一。她非常努力，而且即便她的工作量很大，她也总是让人看起来觉得她每天都精力充沛。

My sister has always been my first mentor in my life since the first day I got into elementary school. As she is eight years older than me, she could give me a myriad of tips and detailed guidance on schooling and life perspectives, which I feel grateful.

我的姐姐从我进入小学开始就成为了我人生当中的第1位导师。由于她大我八岁，她能够在学习中和生活上给予我许多建议和细节的指导，这让我很感激。

I remember there was a time when I was preparing for the Gaokao, which is the college entrance examination in China, Xiao was the person I could fall back on. My goal was to nail it so that I could get into an ideal college. You know, math was a horrible subject that tormented me the most. I just somehow couldn’t figure out the questions. Since she has been through this, she constantly consoled me and gave me instruction as much as she could. She kept telling me that ‘what doesn’t kill you makes you stronger’. You know what, that sentence made me feel pumped as I was surely aware that my sister managed to strive to be a straight-A student from scratch. With this belief, I eventually got good scores in that crucial exam during my life and was matriculated to my ideal college.

我记得有一次，是我在备战高考的时候，这是中国大学的入学考试，Xiao是我能够依靠的人。我当时的目标就是战胜高考然后去一个理想的大学读书。当时数学对我来说最难，是最折磨我的科目。不知怎么的，我就是不太能够把题目解出来。由于她经过这些，她经常会安慰我，然后尽力给我指导。她不断告诉我，那些杀不死你的只会让你更加强大。你知道吗，那句话真是让我很打鸡血，因为我十分清楚我姐姐就是一个从啥都不是的人变成了尖子生。怀揣着这个信念，我最终在人生的这场重要考试中获得了理想分数，被我理想的院校录取了。。

The reason why I felt her encouragement worked was that my sister was a role model for me. You know, although she was not in the same situation, the same core essence of not giving up enabled me to carry on.

我觉得她的鼓励起作用的原因就是我姐姐是我的楷模。虽然她当时所处的情况不一样，但是这种同样的永不言弃的本质让我坚持了下来。