Some people think children have the freedom to make mistakes,while other people believe that adults should prevent children from making mistakes.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
话题：教育类
类型：双边讨论类
翻译：一些人认为犯错是孩子的自由，家长不应该干涉，另一些人认为，成年人应当阻止孩子犯错误，讨论双边观点给出自己的想法。
1.题目分析：
中英文中我们都有一个说法叫做learn from mistakes,在错误中成长。所以let children fail在很多人心里是一件很有必要的事情Learning from mistakes is an important part of child and adolescent development.
相信各位小伙伴都有成长过程中出错的经历，考试没考好，错怪了好友，运动会上失误等等,对于这些事情的思考和行为的改进，促进了我们的成长。Whether it involves homework,developing friendships or playing a sport,learning is enriched through error.
1)当孩子们犯错误时，Even though it is unpleasant,they learn to reflect on their own actions,manage their emotions,take another’s perspective,solve problems and compromise.如果成年人阻止错误发生，children will miss out all these skill-building opportunities.
2）When children are given the opportunity to struggle and sometimes fail,we allow them to develop important social and emotional skills.成年人的职责可以是去support去guide，孩子们在犯错误和自我对抗困难时候他们的coping and resilience skills can be developed.
我们看到在挫折中成长的小孩往往都比较坚强哈哈，如果小时候被过度保护，长大后很有可能会对错误、困难有恐惧心理When kids don’t have opportunities to fail or struggle,they often have lower self-esteem and under-developed problem–solving skills.They also tend to be more fearful of failure and less willing to take risks or try new things.
但是作为家长，都有对自己孩子的强烈保护欲，As a parent,it is tempting to shield children from failure.而这种干预是否是有利于成长的呢？
这个问题曾经在Quora被讨论过。里面的一个答主说的很到位
It depends on the type of mistake.
If it is a mistake which could cause serious harm to children or might affect them in the long-term,adults should interfere and prevent them from doing it.
小孩子还处在学习的阶段，对于很多事情一知半解，好奇感强，很有可能就会不小心犯下错误，有些错误可能还会伤害到他们自己，有些伤害甚至会波及到日后的生活，对于这种问题毋庸置疑，大人们应该予以阻止。
但是对于哪些不是很严重的问题，还是要放手让孩子去犯错，去经历而Parents’list should be full of ways to nurture,support,teach and provide for their children.
2.范文分析
Some people believe that children should be allowed to make and learn from mistakes,while others think parents’intervention is needed to prevent these mistakes.
结构：开头段：改写题目给出两方观点
好词：intervention-action taken to improve or help a situation-介入（尝试改变或使一个情况变好）比如，政府对经济的干涉the government’s intervention in the economy
On the one hand,it is understandable that watching children making mistakes is painful for most parents.When noticing children falling out with friends or off a climbing frame,parents’instinct is to protect their children.Especially when children are doing something very dangerous,guidance and prevention from parents can help to avoid unnecessary but painful consequences.Under this situation,learning from the mistakes on their own would mean paying prices that are too high to afford.
结构：论证第 一方观点：观点句+递进的展开句+后果总结
两点：给出了具体的例子，especilly前后递进
好词：instinct-本能直觉，例如His first instinct was to run away./I've always trusted my instincts in the past.
On the other hand,children learn important lessons from making mistakes and gain confidence when they spring back from them.Through the process of facing mistakes and finding out solutions,their emotional intelligence can be cultivated as they know what to do in the future,and at the same time,their ability to control anger and frustration,which are the building blocks for coping in life,can be developed.In contrast,when kids don’t have opportunities to fail or struggle,they often have lower self-esteem and underdeveloped problem–solving skills.They also tend to be more fearful of failure and less willing to take risks or try new things.
结构：论证第二方观点：观点句+解释展开+对比
好词：low self-esteem,underdeveloped problem-solving skills
In my opinion,mistakes are unavoidable and they are great sources for children to learn and grow.However,parents do need to consider the severity and frequency of the mistakes to provide proper guidance and protection.
结构:结合上文内容，给出自己立场
好词：severity严重性-the severity of the problem
