When developing technology,the traditional skills and ways of life die out.It is pointless to try and keep them alive.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

话题：科技类，传统模式被新兴技术替代

类型：同意与否类

翻译：当发展科技时，传统技术和传统生活方式会消失不复存在，保留它们也没有意义，你在多大程度上同意或不同意此观点？

1.题目解析

本题考查科技改变生活，此类型题目会使用到今昔对比，对比在过去是什么样子，而现如今或是科技更加发达后会是什么样子。

今昔对比涉及对比的连接词及过去和现在的时间表达，小伙伴们首先要积累好，今昔对比常用的词汇哦。

科技改变生活是雅思写作中的老常客，比如：

现代科技的发展是让人们的生活变得更加便捷还是更加复杂

科技是否改变了教育的方式-在线教育

雅思写作大作文范文-在线教育

雅思大作文范文-大学提供网课

互联网的发展是否可以取代书信或者图书馆

雅思写作大作文范文-科技类1

20210701大作文考题超详细解析+范文（真题考察图书馆被替代）

互联网，电视等替代传统旅游

20210626大作文考题超详细解析+范文

的确，现代科技很万 能Modern technology has been used for many tasks such as agriculture,industries,and the machines have replaced people’s manual tasks in most cases.

而我们的交流方式随着科技的发展也发生着变化。

The internet alters the way of communication dramatically;instead of visiting family these days,for example,people speak with each other over the phone or chat using social media like Facebook or Twitter.

但是传统技术不仅是一门技术，更是前人留给我们的珍贵遗产Traditional skill is the heritage from our ancestor，so we have responsibilities to take care for it.

无论技术再怎么发展，我们还是看到很多人保持着传统的生活方式，坚持传承着传统的技术

Technology offers us a better alternative,we should cordially accept that but we should also respect the people who among us maintain the old way of life.

（alternative：形容词-供选择的，可替代的方式-alternative method;名词-可供选择的事物，选项，选择-We

have no alternative but to fire him.-好词，背下来，写作阅读都会考）

2.范文分析

Technology is flourishing by leaps and bounds and undoubtedly this advancement is taking toll on the traditional values.I do believe that in this technological world traditional values are bound to disappear.

结构：话题引入+观点给出

两点：词用的实在是很地道

好词：

leaps and bounds-是大踏步的、跨越式的发展

bound to do sth-bound to do/be something certain or likely to happen,or to do or be something-注定会

·There are bound to be changes when the new system is introduced.

·It's bound to be sunny again tomorrow.

To initiate with,there are many reasons why these conventional values have no existence in this modern world.First of all,In this fast paced world,everyone is assisted with mobile phone to stay connected with their family and friends.However,（对比论证）in old times people used to send letters and stand in the long queues for maturity of one call.This advancement in the modes of communication has proved that traditional skills are worth for nothing.Secondly,technology has transformed the world of fashion.Earlier people used to do knitting,stitching,and designing manually but now machines have made every task easier and comfortable.To substantiate my view,many of fashion designing students were seen portraying pictures of model themselves for checking the compatibility of colors but at present this work is done in seconds on multifarious advanced softwares.Apart from this,hardly any one is seen purchasing pitcher for cool water because of the invention of refrigerators.

结构：

主题句

分论点1+展开（对应的ways of life）

分论点2+展开（对应的skills）

好词：

Multifarious:of many different kinds;having great variety多种的；各种各样的；多样的

To conclude,the evolution of modern technology is an ongoing process,so,the time-consuming traditional methods will not be able to maintain their pace with these latest trends.hence,it is useless and wastage to time to preserve them.

结构：总结+重述个人观点

好词：on going process/time-consuming/maintain the pace with

（Source：https://western-overseas.com/ielts-writing-task-2-sample-answers/）

注：本文的一个巨大的优点在于词组固定搭配等使用非常好，有很多值得借鉴，值得背诵的词汇使用，从这个角度来讲，对我们写科技改变生活类的文章很有借鉴意义。但本文全文234个字没有符合字数要求，作者虽然是一边倒的观点，但是完全没有让步段或者提及反方观点，我们在自己写的时候要注意加入反方观点的让步段