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科技类雅思写作大作文范文:网络对图书馆的冲击

作者:沈阳新航道 2022-02-10 16:46
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Due to the development of the internet,public libraries are no longer necessary.To what extent do you agree or disagree?


话题:科技类


类型:同意与否


翻译:随着网络的发展,公共图书馆不再是城市必备,你是否同意这个观点。


话题分析:科技类的话题,主要考察科技改变生活,这就是一道科技改变生活的题目,考察在网络时代,传统的公共图书馆是否还被人们所需要。在过去图书馆一直是一个城市必不可少的元素


Libraries have always been at the heart of the communities they serve.They are accessible and safe spaces,providing access to huge resources of information and knowledge.


然而如今,它的地位却受到了挑战


But today,public libraries are at a turning point.The way we access and consume information has changed dramatically in the 21st century,and this presents major challenges and opportunities for public library systems across the world.


咱们前面讲构思的时候,曾经跟大家讲过,考虑一个事件,可以分两个层次,即:


第 一层:必要性(necessity)或可行性(availability/possibility)


第二层:好处和弊端(pros and cons)


咱们以此来进行一下今天这道题目的构思:


首先:网络获取书籍,信息和数据的可行性-可以说现在大部分的书籍和杂志都有电子版-Nowadays,most books and magazines are being digitalized,and people find it convenient to search for information and read newly published novels online.所以可以说在线获取图书馆中提供的相同资源是可行的


其次:我们来想一想网络获取信息的好处-在现实生活中,我们会发现有一些杂志,书籍或是数据库会收少量费用,但即便如此,有很多人依然会选择在线阅读而非去图书馆,因为省时省力-Although most online magazines,e-books and databases charge fees for downloading or reading,people still prefer using them in consideration of their insufficient time and energy.


我们再来看一看取消公共图书馆的可行性:


图书馆是不是只有看书借书一个功能呢?并不是,很多图书馆都设有儿童角或儿童活动中心,所以我们看到,除了看书功能图书馆还兼具社交活动功能,这是网络阅读所不能提供的-many parents find that libraries are great places for their kids to socialize and find an interest in books.


另外公共图书馆有没有好处呢?公共图书馆有一个非常棒的好处可以写在雅思作文中,论证会有深度且强筋有力:Libraries are public facilities that aim to serve every citizen in the country and enhance the literacy of the whole society.So,people who cannot afford digital books or get access to the internet still need to use libraries,and their needs should not be ignored.-公共图书馆为那些无法支付网上阅读费用的人提供了学习机会,里面免费的学习资源可以让任何人都沉浸在知识的海洋中,提升整个城市的文化水平。


好啦,分析了这么多,运用了我们前面提到过的构思方法,想必大家已经清晰了这道题目可以书写的观点啦,咱们就一起来看一篇精选范文吧~


范文分析:


It is often argued that public libraries have become redundant(


not needed or useful多余的)because of the easy availability(咱们分析了这么多篇范文,大家有没有发现available/availability这个词常常被使用呢,包括在雅思阅读中也常常出现,非常好用的一个词,可用来替换have,请大家背诵使用)of information online.However,I totally disagree with this idea.


(开头段:话题引入+给出明确的自己的观点)


It is true that all information known to the mankind is now available on the internet.(使用了形式主语)Internet accessibility has also improved over the years.(时态使用很到位,现在完成时表示这几年间发生的变化,咱们雅思写作中表示今夕变化的时候常用现在完成时)However,this does not mean that public libraries are no longer needed.


(简单明了的承认反方现象-之后反驳了反方观点)


Libraries are much more than mere(仅仅,只不过)access points for books and information.They serve some other purposes as well.For example,libraries provide a quiet environment where one can read and learn.Distractions of everyday life can kill the joy of reading.Libraries offer a solution to this problem.Also,when you are in an environment where everyone is reading,you will also be motivated to get your reading done.This may not be possible at home,even if you can find the same reading material online.


(观点:图书馆不仅仅提供书籍-展开:它还提供了适宜读书的环境)


The internet is a vast pool of information but if you do not know what you are looking for,it is nearly impossible to find relevant information online.Libraries,on the other hand,make research easier by grouping books on a particular topic together.Even if you do not know anything about a given topic,you will still be able to find relevant information on that topic.Today’s libraries also provide access to computers and tablets so that users can search online if they need more information on a topic.


(观点:图书馆和网上阅读相比的其他好处-图书馆的分类方式更容易快速找到相关信息)


Internet accessibility may have improved over the years,but there are still millions of people who do not have access to the internet.Public libraries are the only sources of information for them.If libraries were to die,they would be in trouble.


(观点:即便网络覆盖率高了,仍然有没有网络的地区,对于这些地方的人,图书馆至关重要)


To conclude,despite the existence of all information online,libraries are still important because they provide an environment conducive(making it easy,possible or likely for sth to happen使容易或有可能发生)to reading and learning.


(despite的句型在结尾段很适用,despite+反方,我方)


这篇文章除了文中标出的好词之外,其可圈可点之处在于其结构:


开头段(改写+自己观点)


主体1段:给出观点+解释观点+举例支撑(也就是观点(idea)-解释(explain)-举例(example))-(支持自己观点的第 一条原因)


主体2段:观点-解释-举例(或者对比,假设都可以)(支持自己观点的第 一条原因)


让步段:给出反方观点-论证反方观点-反驳反方观点


结尾(总结+重申观点)


这样调整下来文章一共五个自然段(文中还给出了一个主体3段写观点3,我们自己写文章时可以省略,两条支撑自己立场的分论点即可),除了开头结尾,剩下三个段,两个是自己方,一个是反方。很多高分文章也都采取了这种结构,且这样可以保证每个分论点都得到充分的展开。大家可以自己尝试着使用这种结构来写一下这道题目哦。


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