These days,many people have their own computer and telephone,so it is quite easy for them to do their job at home.
Does working at home have more advantages or more disadvantages?
翻译：现如今，很多人有自己的电脑和手机，所以在家办公变得很简单。在家办公的好处是否大于弊端？
话题：科技类
类型：利弊分析
分析：
试想，清晨起床，洗漱完毕，吃好早餐，整装待发的你拿起公文包，准备出发。
走出卧室，穿过客厅，你来到了自己的办公场所-家里的书房；放下公文包，你拉开了自己的办公椅-一个你刚刚给自己换置的可躺可调高沙发椅，一把懂你的椅子。
忙了一上午，午餐时间到了，走出办公场所，厨房里的饭菜香味就飘来了，没有地沟油，没有塑料盒，营养丰盛而健康。
下午和同事进行视频会议，老板提到了一个新名词问大家，你昨晚没有好好准备一脸茫然，赶紧掏出了手机查一下，有惊无险，如果在办公室这种小动作可没法做
工作顺利完成了，收拾收拾，整理好公文包，你关上灯，心满意足的走出办公场所，一抬头，看到了正在客厅看电视的家人。
Jobs that let you work from home,an arrangement known as telecommuting,are all the rage these days.很多人为每日拥挤冗长的通勤路烦恼，为紧张复杂的办公室关系困扰。They would even be willing to take a pay cut in order to work from home.这样他们可有避免花时间在通勤上avoid a commute,减少压力less stress，并拥有更好的work-life balance,更高的productivity,更加independent。
然而小编我并不认为working from home是件很爽的事情。When you don’t have that separation of going to and from the office,your workday kind of blurs together into your home life.如果工作和生活的空间不能有效隔离，工作生活混淆，于我而言会致使工作效率低，放松时也会紧张会思考工作。
另外和同事相处，在休息时闲聊几句，有问题的时候和同事谈谈，其实也可以帮助提高工作效率，有时和同事进行的头脑风暴会大大帮助你工作顺利进行，而这些在家真的很难操作。Whether it’s picking up on the best practices of your colleagues or having an impromptu brainstorming session over lunch,it’s hard to replicate that from home.
更何况在家办公会受到科技发展、信息平台的制约，很有可能有些你工作急需的数据为了保证隐私只能用公司网络登录，而家庭网络会是受到阻拦data security or consumer protection concerns might prevent telecommuters from having full access.
好啦，你怎么看呢，你更喜欢在家办公还是办公室办公呢？
咱们一起看看今天的范文怎么说
范文分析：
In the present age it is common for people to work from home because of advances in technology.On balance,I would argue that this has more negative impacts than positive.
（开头段：引入话题+个人观点，简洁明了，个人观点清晰）
One advantage of working from home is the freedom it provides（观点）.Home workers can organise their work around their home life as they can stop or start work as they please（解释）,and thus if,for example,they have children,they can easily arrange to take them and pick them up from school.They can also undertake（动词：承担，从事，常见搭配：undertake a task/project）any other tasks that they need to do during the day,such as doing the laundry or shopping,and then finish work later（举例）.Overall then,employees have more control over their lives（总结）.
（好处段：更自由，可以更好的掌控生活）
Despite these positive factors,however,there are a number of disadvantages.The first of these is the fact that those who work at home nearly all the time will not be mixing with colleagues.When people are at work,they are always surrounded by others,but at home,an employee is likely to be alone most the time.This may lead to feelings of loneliness due to a lack of interaction（名词：互动，交流）.
（弊端1：缺乏交流，孤单）
Another drawback is the fact that one may have less influence in the company.It is often the case that important decisions arise on the spur of the moment（习语：一时冲动之下，心血来潮）as unexpected issues arise.If an employee is not there,others may have to step in.If this occurs on a regular basis,the employees contribution to the company may decline,meaning a higher probability of getting overlooked（动词：忽视；提拔等对某人不予考虑）for things such as promotion.
（弊端2：影响在公司的存在感）
In conclusion,although there are positives and negatives related to working from home,there are more negative impacts.Employees should therefore consider carefully whether working from home is the best choice.
（结尾：总结全文）
本文没有较难的词汇，但是全文流畅通顺，评分标准中连贯一致Coherence and Cohesion这一项做的非常好。
整体而言，作者的观点是弊大于利，因此在文章布局时采取了一段优点，两段缺点的写法，既将优缺点都有效探讨到，又突出了缺点。段落布局与开头结尾观点相一致
段落之间：每段开头都有明确的主题句（下划线标出的部分），在写完优点后，弊端第 一段用了Despite these positive factors开头，承上启下。第二个弊端段开头更是用了Another drawback is…开头，和上一段相呼应，段间逻辑十分清晰。
主体段句子之间的整体逻辑为-观点，解释，举例。步步深入，每一个观点都得到了充分展开。
除了连贯一致的亮点外，文章中标阴影的部分为地道的词伙使用。不是有多生僻少见，而是使用有多natural，背诵这些词汇可以帮助改善生硬的表达，改善自己按中文思路拼凑出来表达而考官读不懂或读起来很奇怪的现象。
