1.避免过多使用really,so,a lot,very
A类雅思写作考试的文章，与严格意义上的学术论文还是有一定距离的，但是我们仍要注意语言的学术规范性，要使用较为正式，精确的词汇来表意，避免过于随意的词汇
而如really,so,a lot,very这样的词汇表意并不十分精确严密（avoid using imprecise language）
举个例子：
This job is very hard.
可以改写成：
This job is tough.
This job seems demanding.
tough：difficult to accomplish
demanding：requiring much time,effort,or attention
这两个词都可以表达very hard的意思，但是比very hard要更加具体，精确
在雅思写作中，我们尽量尝试将really,so,a lot,very改为较为具体精确的词汇
Very good：
top-notch:of the highest quality
outstanding:clearly very much better than what is usual
exceptional:much greater than usual,especially in skill,intelligence,quality,etc
Very bad
horrible:very unpleasant or bad
distressing:upsetting or worrying
awful:extremely bad or unpleasant
Very delicious
appetizing:appetizing food or smells make you want to eat
delectable:looking or tasting extremely good,and giving great pleasure
flavorful:full of flavor
另外一些句子中，考虑这样的词是否有出现的必要，是否可以直接删除
Robot-driven car is really controversial
==>Robot-driven car is controversial
2.避免使用简写
Don’t==>do not
Can’t==>cannot
Mustn’t==>must not
Couldn’t==>could not
Wouldn’t==>would not
Isn’t==>is not
Haven’t==>have not
Hasn’t==>has not
3.注意2种语法错误
sentence fragment-句子不完整，句子残缺
我们都知道一个完整的句子需要至少包含主语和谓语动词，需要表达一个完整的意思，但很多时候在文章书写时，我们都有可能产生疏漏，写出成分不完全的句子
比如：
l The doctor worked round the clock.Operating on the boy.
l As India has entered the WTO.The local entrepreneurs are faced with both challenges and opportunities.
上面的两个例子中：
第1个句子operating是个动名词结构但是句子缺乏谓语动词，而如果operate作为谓语动词，句子则又缺乏主语，虽然和前句的主语一致，但是作为独立的句子，依然不可缺乏必要成分
改为：The doctor worked around the clock,operating on the boy.
第二个句子India has entered the WTO是个完整的句子，但是因为前面加入了as，使其变为了一个状语从句，而状语无法作为独立的句子加句号，
改为：As India has entered the WTO,the local entrepreneurs are faced with both challenges and opportunities.
Run-on Sentences-写啊写啊写不停，忘记了标点...
我们口语表达时候，经常会出现吧啦吧啦说一串，口语中的抑扬顿挫和停顿都可以暗示断句和不同组的意思，然而写作则不同，如果没有标点，我们的句子和意思就很难得到有效划分。
比如：
Van Gogh is a world-famous artist his paintings can be found in many museums and art galleries.
这句话从头写到尾，出现了两个意思，两个主语，两个主动词，很明显是写激动了忘记了加标点
改为：
Van Gogh is a world-famous artist whose paintings can be found in many museums and art galleries.
Van Gogh is a world-famous artist.His paintings can be found in many museums and art galleries.
Van Gogh is a world-famous artist;his paintings can be found in many museums and art galleries.
注意与这种问题相伴的，就是很多小伙伴喜欢顺手就用逗号隔断两个句子，要注意逗号的力度不足以连接两个句子哦
比如：
Allen Ginsberg is a renowned American poet,his most famous poem is Howl.
需要改为：
Allen Ginsberg is a renowned American poet,whose most famous poem is Howl.
Allen Ginsberg is a renowned American poet.His most famous poem is Howl.
Allen Ginsberg is a renowned American poet;his most famous poem is Howl.
