在雅思写作中经常需要使用连接词，很多学生经常因为连接词使用不当而失分。下面由新航道的沈阳雅思培训小编为您解答！

　　1、衔接词误用导致拼写错误

　　a.Thesenseofbelongingtoateamoraworkingcommunityalsocontributestojobsatisfaction.Becausecolleagueshelpeachothertoenjoytheirworkinglives.

　　错误点：because是连词，不能独立成句。

　　正确的句子：Thesenseofbelongingtoateamoraworkingcommunityalsocontributestojobsatisfaction,becausecolleagueshelpeachothertoenjoytheirworkinglives.(选自剑7Test3Task2书后范文)

　　b.Governmentsoughttorestrictadvertisementsforharmfulproducts.Suchasalcoholandtobacco,however,theydonothavethepowertocontrolotherformsofadvertising.

　　错误点：suchas后加同位语，不能独立成句；however是副词，不能连接两个句子。

　　正确的句子：Governmentsoughttorestrictadvertisementsforharmfulproducts,suchasalcoholandtobacco.However,theydonothavethepowertocontrolotherformsofadvertising.(例句选自考官范文)

　　2、由于衔接词误用而导致的逻辑错误

　　Somepeoplesupportthateducationshouldhelpstudentsbecomeusefultothesociety,becausestudentswillhavemoreknowledgeafterbeingeducated.

　　错误点：学生接受教育，变得知识和教育应该培养学生对社会贡献不明确的因果逻辑关系，使用明显的因果逻辑词，前后句子逻辑混乱。

　　正确的句子：Educationshouldmakestudentsusefulmembersofsocietybecauseeducationisfinanciallysupportedbythegovernmentandstudentswhomakeuseoftheresourceshouldrepaythesociety.

　　句子之间的逻辑：由于政府资助教育，教育应该培养对社会有用的人，回报社会。逻辑。

　　3、“偏激型”的衔接问题

　　Firstofall,thelateparenthoodisbecauseoftherisingcostofliving.Asweallknow,youngpeopleareoftenpaidlessintheworkingworld.Therefore,theyarelesslikelytosaveenoughmoneytoguaranteeahighstandardofliving.Furthermore,sincemostyoungpeoplearewell-educated,theyarefullyawareoftheimportanceoflivingenvironmenttoachild’sgrowth.Besides,genderequalityallowsalargenumberofwomentopursuetheircareerambitions.However,iftheyhavechildrenearly,theyhavetopaymoreattentiontotheirfamilycommitment.Asaresult,theymaymissoutopportunitiestoimprovetheirjobskillsandgetpromoted.

　　问题表现：过度使用连接词，本段的每个句子都使用一个连接词，并不是每个连接都足够准确。例如，furthermore通常用于补充新的观点。这种写作方法很容易被考官判定为“mechanicalwriting后果是CoherenceandCohesion(连贯与衔接)这部分的分数不超过6分。

　　上段可调如下：

　　Thelateparenthoodamongyoungadultsisperhapsattributedtotherisingcostofliving.Youngpeopleareoftenpaidlessintheworkingworld,sotheyarelesslikelytosaveenoughmoneytoguaranteeahighstandardoflivingiftheyneedtoraiseachild.Sincemostyoungpeoplearewell-educated,theyarefullyawareoftheimportanceoflivingenvironmenttoachild’sgrowth.Thisiswhytheyareunwillingtohavechildrenuntiltheyarewell-prepared.Anotherreasonforthistrendisthegenderequalityallowsalargenumberofwomentopursuetheircareerambitions.Iftheyhavechildrenearly,theyhavetopaymoreattentiontotheirfamilycommitmentandmaymissoutopportunitiestoim

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