在准备雅思短文的过程中,很多学生觉得剑桥雅思考官的范文并不多,尤其是静态图表。在剑4-14中,只有4篇关于静态图表有价值的参考范文,最近的一篇可以追溯到遥远的剑8(2011年出版)。剑桥雅思9-14中没有静态图表的官方范文。下面由新航道的沈阳雅思培训小编为您解答!
在雅思写作的学习过程中,随着考试时间的推移,训练题不断创新和更换。我们将重点关注相对较新的试题。比如剑13第四套的地图题一直在训练,第一套的地图题,第二套的题是之前一段时间的模型题(最近换了),第三套的题是剑13的静态图表,难度不小。
今天,新航道小编与同学们分享了另一个非常有代表性的静态图表,并发送了一篇范文。The chart below shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the faculties of a major university in 2012.
剑桥雅思有价值的高分范文!
回顾一些知识点
1. 2012年只有一个时间,是静态图,不能上升,减少这些词汇;
2. 写之前要考虑如何分段,静态图的分段依据对象的大小排名;
3. 创建静态图的关键是比较。比较内容:最、倍率、差值、水平对比,相似;
4. 对象的分类整合和数据的等价对待都体现出来,既满足了评分要求,又改变了句型,字数也足够了;
5. 数据不需要全部写出来,例如, business 和 science,男女的比例都是约定的 65% 和 35%,可以一句话简述;
6. 不要处理数据背后的原因。
原创范文
Thebarchartcomparestheproportionofmenandwomenwhotaughtinsevendifferent faculties ofarticularivisin2012.
Itisclearthatmaleshadhigherproportionsinengineering,business,lawand science.Thelargestgenderdisparitywasinengineering,wwere85%ofteachersweremales,withonly15?males.Thedifferencewaslessexaggeratedinlaw,withaladicsocococupying60%oftotalteachers.Itisinterestingtonotethat business and sciencehadthesamepercentageofmenandwomen,with 65% maleto35?maleacademicsinthosefaculties.(engineering,business,lawand science的男性比例较高,可以写一段)
In contrast, the percentage of males in arts, education and medicine was much smaller compared to the four faculties mentioned above. Among them, female teachers predominated in education, where three quarters of the academic staff were women, and this figure was three times as high as that of men. In medicine, gender representation was almost equal, at 50%, while in arts, slightly more than half of the academics were females (55%).(其他三个 faculties 男性比例较低,变成另一段)
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