本段通过适当引用数据引出主题，并提示分析3个原因，以下2-4段，每段分析一个原因。有些老师不建议在雅思作文中使用数据，但事实上，如果使用得当，这是完全可以的。下面由新航道的沈阳雅思培训小编为您解答！
雅思参考范文分析老师笔记
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Research shows that globally more than 20% of criminals, the majority of whom are young adults, will revert to anti-social behaviour after being released from prison. There are, to my mind, three reasons why this happens.
研究发现，在全球范围内，超过20%的罪犯大多是年轻人，出狱后将走上反社会的旧路。在我看来，这有三个原因。
解析
(1) 本段通过适当引用数据引出主题，并提示分析以下2-4段的三个原因，每段分析一个原因。有些老师不建议在雅思作文中使用数据，但事实上，如果使用得当，这是完全可以的。
(2) Globally 大陆的全球范围
(3) The majority of... 多数...
(4) Revert to... 恢复(之前的坏习惯，比如revert to smoking）
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Many criminals find they simply cannot find a job to support themselves after being freed from prison. Having been secluded from the real world for a long while, they find themselves no longer needed by the world that changes on a daily basis. Then, without a choice, they have to steal, rob, or even kill people, just for survival’s sake.
许多罪犯发现，他们在出狱后找不到工作来养活自己。在与现实世界隔绝了很长一段时间后，他们发现自己不再被不断变化的世界所要求。这样，他们别无选择，只能盗窃、抢劫，甚至杀人，只是为了生存。
解析
(1) 原因一：找不到工作，为了生存，只能再犯罪。注：中间一句话简单地讨论了找不到工作的原因。
(2) Seclude 阻隔
(3) For a long while 很长时间
(4) On a daily basis 每天地
(5) For survival’s sake 为了生存的原因
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Another important reason has to do with the criminals’ experience in prison. Many criminals complain that they have received improper treatment while they are in prison. They are verbally abused, physically punished, and mentally despised. Consequently, when they go out of prison, what fills their heart is hatred, rather than love, for the world.
另一个重要原因与罪犯在监狱里的经历有关。许多罪犯抱怨说，他们在监狱里受到了不恰当的待遇。他们被虐待、体罚和精神鄙视。因此，当他们走出监狱时，他们充满了对世界的仇恨，而不是爱。
解析
(1) 原因二：在狱中没有得到适当的对待，因此产生仇恨情绪。
(2) To have to do with... 与...有关
(3) Verbally 语言上地
(4) Despise 鄙视
(5) Consequently 结果；因此
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Finally, most former criminals are not really accepted by the general society of mankind. Having biased views on them, people always try to avoid them, not to mention making friends with them, leaving them isolated from the rest of the world. Then, just like the beast in Frankenstein, they easily get involved in anti-social behaviour of various kinds.
最后，大多数前罪犯并没有真正得到人类普通社会的认可。因为人们对他们有偏见，人们总是试图避免他们，更不用说和他们交朋友，阻止他们与世界其他地方交朋友了。然后，就像弗兰肯斯坦的野兽一样，他们很容易陷入各种反社会行为。
解析
(1) 第三个原因是社会不接受导致出狱的罪犯再次犯罪。请注意，这一段使用了弗兰肯斯坦的典故。
(2) Biased 有偏见的
(3) Not to mention... 更不用说...
(4) Isolate 使...隔离
(5) Get involved in... 陷入；卷进
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