与其用模板开头，不如直接做。你应该记住，大多数考试经验或老师告诉你的所谓开头模板现在不能使用了。如果使用，效果一定很差，下面由新航道的沈阳雅思小编为您解答！
01、The invention of mobile phone has enabled us to answer both work and personal calls twenty-four hours a day, seven days a week. I believe this has brought more beneficial than harmful effects on both individuals and the society as a whole.
手机的发明使我们每天24小时，每周7天，同时接听工作和私人电话。我相信这对个人和整个社会都有利大于弊。
解析
(1)本段直接提出话题和自己的想法。与其用模板开头，不如直接做。大家要记住，大部分考试经验书或者老师告诉你的所谓开头模板现在都不能用了。如果采用，效果肯定很差。
（2）Invention 发明
（3）Twenty-four hours a day, seven days a week 全天候不间断
（4）As a whole 整个地
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02、With mobile phones, we can get the first-hand information about our family and friends as well as our work in a fast and convenient way that was unimaginable in the past. Before we had mobile phones, we had to spend hours writing a letter and then travelling a few miles to the post office to send it to our friends, and then waited many days for the reply. But now it is a matter of just a few clicks. Yet the increased use of mobile phones has greatly reduced the opportunities for people to engage in face-to-face communication. Without the help of body language and facial expression, the communication over mobile phones may easily end in misunderstanding. Of course, the excessive dependence upon mobile phones for information may also contribute to the estrangement among their users.
有了手机，我们可以以难以想象的快速和方便的方式获得家人和朋友，以及我们工作的手部信息。在我们有手机之前，我们不得不花几个小时写一封信，然后去邮局寄给我们的朋友，然后等待很多天才收到回复。但现在只要点击两次。然而，手机的使用大大减少了零距离交流的机会。没有身体语言和面部情绪的支持，手机上的交流很容易以误解结束。当然，过度依赖手机获取信息也会导致手机用户之间的疏远。
解析
(1)本段阐述了手机对个人的好处和坏处:好处是沟通快捷方便；缺点是容易引起误解和隔离。
（2）Unimaginable 不可想象的
（3）Engage in 从事；进行
（4）Facial expression 面部表情
（5）End in... 结束于...
（6）Excessive 过多的
（7）Contribute to... 有利于；造成
（8）Estrangement 隔离；疏远
03、Obviously, the wide use of mobile phones has boosted the productivity and efficiency of the entire society. Let us just imagine how many lives have been saved because the hospitals can receive information in time about the seriously ill patients from the mobile phones and how many criminals have been caught because the police can receive information in time about the bad people. But with the efficiency and productivity also comes the fast tempo of life that many people find too stressful, and the scam calls are disturbing, and sometimes even destructive to people’s normal life. Fortunately, with proper education, all these problems can be effectively solved.
显然，手机的广泛应用提高了整个社会的生产力和效率。让我们想象一下，有多少人的生命被拯救了，因为医院可以及时从手机上收到关于严重疾病患者的信息，有多少罪犯被抓住了，因为警察可以及时收到关于坏人的信息。但随着效率和生产力的提高，生活节奏也加快了，许多人感到了巨大的压力，而那些欺诈电话令人不安，有时甚至破坏了人们的正常生活。幸运的是，通过适当的教育，所有这些问题都可以得到有效的解决。
解析
（1）本文讨论了电话对社会的好处和坏处：好处是提高生产力和效率；缺点是加快生活节奏和欺诈电话。但同时，这些问题也可以得到解决。
（2）Boost 促进；提升
（3）Productivity 生产力
（4）Tempo of life 生活节奏
（5）Stressful 有压力的
（6）Scam call 诈骗电话
（7）Disturbing 令人不安的
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