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雅思作文7分范文分析

作者:沈阳新航道 2024-03-05 10:18
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  混合大作文,社会话题:The unlimited use of cars may cause many problems. What are those problems? In order to reduce the problems, should we discourage people to use car?下面由新航道的沈阳雅思培训小编为您解答!


  问题疏忽:乱用汽车导致很多问题。问题包括哪些?我们应该减少用车来减少这些问题吗?


  思路解析:


  这个话题包括两部分:1)汽车造成了哪些问题;2)要解决这个问题,是否必须控制汽车的使用?


  先说文章结构。根据问什么答什么的原则,两个主段分别回应两个部分;主段-1分析问题;主段-2分析方法;


  关键词挖掘-1:问题是problems,所以段落要列出两个问题,解释时要写清楚与汽车使用的直接因果关系;


  关键词挖掘-2:第二个问题是In order to…,should..这里你需要讨论的是一种行为和目的之间的逻辑关系——是否必须采取一种行为才能达到一定的目的;当然,如果可以,解释两者之间的必然性,如果你想让你的想法更合理,解释没有其他方法;如果答案是否定的,指出要达到这个目的,不仅仅是问题提出的方法,以便给出其他方法和解释;

 

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  提纲:高分写作示范


  It is true that the relentless use of vehicles has give rise to repercussions for various aspects of society. While I tend to focus on its ramifications in terms of the environment and public health, I disagree to discourage the use of private cars simply because of our apprehension about the potential pitfalls.


  Of all concomitants of people’s reliance on vehicles, the most frequently mentioned one is the environmental disruption. For decades, air pollution and exhaustion of fossil fuels have long been ranked high-profile conundrums that exhaust governments, scientists and environmentalists, with greenhouse gas emissions produced by rampant use of vehicle as the major culprit. To complicate matters even more, such a life on wheels has exacerbate the sedentary lifestyle of young generations, thus leading to healthy problems such as obesity, not to mention the increasing respiratory diseases that inextricably stem from exhaust fumes.


  However, to tackle these aforementioned problems does not necessarily mean the demise of vehicles. While the use of motor vehicles does take its toll on the environment and human body, it would be simplistic to confine our solution to discouraging driving while ignoring alternative measures which could be also effective to curb the tricky conditions. One option is the use of greener technology such as electronic cars, which can mitigate gas emissions and energy shortage. To deal with health problems, to educate the populace about importance fitness exercises seems to be a more fundamental approach than a simple prohibition on driving.


  It is my conclusion therefore, although the use of motor vehicles takes a toll on the ecosystem and public health, to discourage the driving trend is not the only option to tackle these problems.


  词汇和语法结构


  Repercussion  负面影响


  Ramification  影响


  Pitfalls  问题


  Exhaustion  耗尽


  Conundrum  问题


  Greenhouse gas emissions  温室气体排放


  Culprit  罪魁祸首


  Sedentary lifestyle 长期坐着的生活方式


  Obesity  肥胖


  Respiratory  呼吸道的


  Exhaust fumes  尾气排放


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