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雅思写作如何选择合适的句法结构?

作者:沈阳新航道 2024-03-13 10:14
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  很多考生在雅思写作时,总是喜欢用几种句型来代替写作,而不在乎是否合适。因此,选择合适的句法结构可以使句子意思的表达更加准确简洁。下面由新航道的沈阳雅思培训小编为您解答!


  1.在雅思写作中,句子的主语和谓语动词应该能够反映句子中最重要的含义。例如:


  The situation thatresulted in my grandfather's not being able to study engineering was that hisfather needed help on the farm.


  从意义上分析,上述句子需要表达的重要概念是“grandfather's not being able to study”.


  雅思写作如何选择合适的句法结构


  在表达这个概念时,原话中使用的主语是situation,谓语动词是was,不能强调需要表达的关键概念,可以改为以下句子:


  My grandfathercouldn't study engineering because his father needed help on the farm.

 

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  2.在雅思写作中,防止频繁使用“there be”构造。


  比如:There were 25 cowson the farm that my grandfather had to milk every day. It was hard work for mygrandfather.


  能够改成:


  My grandfatherworked hard. He had to milk 25 cows on the farm every day.


  更简洁的句型为:


  My grandfatherworked hard milking 25 cows daily.


  3.在雅思写作中,将从句改为句子或单词。


  比如:Dairy cows wereraised on the farm, which was located1000 kilometers from the nearest universityand was in an area that was remote.


  简洁的表达方式如下:


  The dairy farm waslocated in a remote area, 100 kilometers to the nearest university.


  4.在雅思写作中,只有在需要强调宾语而不是主语的时候才使用被动语态。


  比如:In the fall, notonly did the cows have to be milked, but also the hay was mowed and stacked bymy grandfather's family.


  这句话不够简洁的原因是这句话的重点应该是“忙碌的家庭”-my grandfather's family”.


  使用被动语态后,重心似乎变成了cows和hay。以下表达方式为主动语态,相对简洁:


  In the fall, mygrandfather's family not only milked the cow but also mowed and stacked thehay.


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