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作者:沈阳新航道 2024-03-26 10:14
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  It is well known that our present lifestyle has caused serious trouble for the environment. That is why many people suggest that we should give up our comfortable life so that the future generations will be able to enjoy a better environment. Though I think this suggestion is quite relevant, it is far from the best solution to environmental problems.


  众所周知,我们目前的生活方式给环境带来了严重的麻烦。这就是为什么很多人建议我们应该放弃舒适的生活,这样我们的后代才能享受更好的环境。虽然我认为这个建议是合适的,但它远不是解决环境问题的办法。下面由新航道的沈阳雅思培训小编为您解答!


  解析


  (1)本段是典型雅思作文的开头:先引出主题,再改写主题观点,最后给出自己的观点。


  (2)That is why... 那便是为何...


  (3)Relevant 相关的;重要的;合适的;


  (4)Far from 一点也不


  To be sure, the environment would be considerably improved if we chose to live a less comfortable life. As a matter of fact, our present lifestyle is largely responsible for many environmental problems. As more and more cars find their way into households, the exhaust gas emissions from cars have become the major culprit in the air pollution and even global warming. The cheap air travel has contributed a great deal to the consumption of nonrenewable energy. In addition, many people like to use animal products, so they never hesitate to kill wild animals, resulting in the loss of species diversity and destruction of the ecological system. Needless to say, if we drove less, traveled less, and enjoyed less, our environment would become much better.

 

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  当然,如果我们选择过不舒服的生活,环境会有很大的改善。事实上,我们目前的生活方式在一定程度上是造成许多环境问题的原因。随着越来越多的汽车进入家庭,汽车排放的废气已经成为空气污染甚至全球变暖的主要罪魁祸首。廉价的航空旅游导致了大量不可再生资源的消耗。此外,许多人喜欢使用动物产品,所以他们从不犹豫地杀死野生动物,造成物种多样性的损失和生态系统的破坏。不用说,如果我们少开车,少旅行,少享受,我们的环境会好得多。


  解析


  (1)本段首先承认,如果我们放弃目前的生活方式,环境会好得多。本段提到汽车、飞机和动物产品,你也可以写电器、空调等消费。


  (2)To be sure 当然;毫无疑问


  (3)Considerably 极大地


  (4)As a matter of fact 实际上


  (5)Be responsible for... 对...负责;是...的原因


  (6)Largely 在一定程度上


  (7)Find one’s way to/into... 进入...


  (8)Culprit 罪犯;(后果)原因


  (9)Contribute to... 为...贡献;有利于...


  (10)Result in... 造成


  (11)Species diversity 物种多样性


  The issue is, however, that few people would like to give up what they have already had. Once having been used to the conveniences of modern lifestyle, they may find it hard to go without them, even if for the sake of the environment. Furthermore, in most countries in the world, it would be too much to force people to adopt the simpler lifestyles of their parents and grandparents.


  然而,问题是,很少有人愿意放弃他们已经拥有的东西。一旦他们习惯了现代生活方式的便利,他们可能会发现,即使是为了环境,也很难没有它们。此外,在世界上大多数国家,强迫人们采取更简单的家庭和祖父母的生活方式是不可行的。


  解析


  (1) 这一段的转折点:给出两个原因,论证迫使人们放弃舒适的生活方式。


  (2) The issue is that... 问题是...


  (3) For the sake of... 为了...


  (4) Adopt 采纳;使用


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