在写作过程中，衔接词的应用是必不可少的，如转折链接、因果链接、分层链接、例子等。通常我们应用的时候感觉很简单，但是你真的用对了吗？很多学生错过雅思写作的原因之一就是句子和段落衔接不当。下面由新航道的沈阳雅思培训小编为您解答！

　　一、衔接词误用引起的拼写错误

　　（1）The sense of belonging to a team or a working community also contributes to job satisfaction. Because colleagues help each other to enjoy their working lives.

　　错误点：because是连词，不能独立成句。

　　正确的句子：The sense of belonging to a team or a working community also contributes to job satisfaction, because colleagues help each other to enjoy their working lives. (选自剑7Test3Task2书后范文)

　　（2）Governments ought to restrict advertisements for harmful products. Such as alcohol and tobacco, however, they do not have the power to control other forms of advertising.

　　错误点：such as 后加同位语，不能独立成句；however是副词，不能连接两个句子。

　　正确的句子：Governmentsoughttorestrictadvertisementsforharmfulproducts,such as alcoholandtobacco.However,theydonothavethepowertocontrolotherformsofadvertising.(例句选自考官范文)

　　雅思写作衔接词使用常见问题

　　二、衔接词误用引起的逻辑错误

　　（1）Some people support that education should help students become useful to the society, because students will have more knowledge after being educated.

　　错误点：学生接受教育，变得知识和教育应该培养学生对社会贡献不明确的因果逻辑关系，使用明显的因果逻辑词，前后句子逻辑混乱。

　　正确的句子：Education should make students useful members of society because education is financially supported by the government and students who make use of the resource should repay the society.

　　句子之间的逻辑：由于政府资助教育，教育应该培养对社会有用的人，回报社会。逻辑。

　　三、“偏激型”的衔接问题

　　First of all, the late parenthood is because of the rising cost of living. As we all know, young people are often paid less in the working world. Therefore, they are less likely to save enough money to guarantee a high standard of living. Furthermore, since most young people are well-educated, they are fully aware of the importance of living environment to a child’s growth. Besides, gender equality allows a large number of women to pursue their career ambitions. However, if they have children early, they have to pay more attention to their family commitment. As a result, they may miss out opportunities to improve their job skills and get promoted.

　　问题表现：过度使用连接词，本段的每个句子都使用一个连接词，并不是每个连接都足够准确。例如，furthermore通常用于补充新的观点。这种写作方法很容易被考官判定为“mechanical writing后果是Coherence and Cohesion (连贯与衔接)这部分得分不超过6分。

　　上段可调如下：

　　The late parenthood among young adults is perhaps attributed to the rising cost of living. Young people are often paid less in the working world, sothey are less likely to save enough money to guarantee a high standard of living if they need to raise a child. Since most young people are well-educated, they are fully aware of the importance of living environment to a child’s growth. This is why they are unwilling to have children until they are well-prepared. Another reason for this trend is the gender equality allows a large number of women

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