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　　Question

　　Do you agree or disagree with the following statement that people’s personalities may change as they grow older?

　　思路解析

　　应持同意：

　　随着年龄的增长，有许多因素可以改变每个人的性格，如：生活经历、理解发展、社会角色等，重点关注两个方面。

　　范文一

　　高级版25-28分(1) 举例）

　　I totally agree with the following statement that people's personalities may change as they grow older,because life experiences are diverse in different stages of one’s life which probably exert great influence to change one’s personality.（观点句）

　　Take myself as an example,when I was a child,I was really introverted.Every time when I talked with friends I got so shy and nervous.But the experiences in the college years changed my personality a lot.I took part in some community activities and I tried to make speeches in public places.Meanwhile I stepped forward towards my goals of study and then I did pretty well and usually achieved support and appreciation from my classmates and teachers.Gradually,I became more outgoing and optimistic.And also I am very confident about myself.That is why I agree with the statement.

　　重点词汇：

　　diverse adj.多样的

　　introverted adj.内向的

　　community n.社团，社区

　　step forward朝前，

　　appreciation n.欣赏

　　optimistic adj.乐观的

　　范文二

　　满分版(2个观点细节扩展2方面)

　　I do agree with the statement that people's personalities may change as they grow older.Firstly,life experiences are so diverse in different stages of one's life that they usually bring some changes to people’s personalities(观点句).Well,some significant life events such as marriage,having children,or even the loss of a loved one can lead to changes in a person's personalities.Meanwhile,changes in cognitive abilities can affect personality as well（观点句）.For example,as people age,they may become more reflective and less impulsive,especially when they need to make important decisions,they are able to keep rational and think twice.In such situation,they can avoid some unnecessary mistakes as well as the loss.

　　重点词汇：

　　significant adj.有价值的

　　marriage n.婚姻

　　lead to造成

　　cognitive adj.理解的

　　reflective adj.反省的

　　impulsive adj.冲动的

　　think twice三思后，

　　loss n.损失

　　范文三

　　满分版(2个观点细节扩展2方面)

　　I totally agree with the statement that people's personalities may change as they grow older.Firstly,as people age they take on a different social roles such as becoming a parent,a leader or a mentor,which can totally influence their personalities traits.Probably they will change their personalities.Like,a mentor needs to be more mature and wise to provide useful and helpful suggestions to others.Also,as people grow older,they may become more self-disciplined and know how to do things rightly.And they will become more sensible and have the better abilities like the ability to overcome obstacles.Thus they will become more strong-willed and brave in their lives.

　　重点词汇：

　　mentor n.导师

　　trait n.特点

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