题目：

Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading.To what extent do you agree?

翻译：与阅读相比，和孩子一起做愉快的活动能为其培养更好的技能和创造力。你在多大程度上同意？

话题：教育类

类型：同意与否

关键词：enjoyable activity,reading,develop better skills and more creativity

分析:这道教育类的题目要大家对阅读和其它有趣的活动进行对比，看哪个更能培养孩子的能力和创造力。那么拿到这道题目，小伙伴们先要想一想，enjoyable activity都能是什么，什么对于孩子来讲是愉快的，可以享受的活动呢？比如“玩”对吗？那么“玩‘又包含了什么呢，具体一点来说，比如painting,比如一些outdoor activities等。试想如果和孩子在室外进行一场需要跑、跳、爬、滚等运动的形式实现的游戏，游戏中孩子还需要发挥想象力来解决问题，那么这个活动不仅能促进全身血液循环，锻炼心肺功能，增加身体运动控制能力和动作灵活性，还可以让儿童在活动中通过对变化的观察，进行分析与判断，思考解决问题的办法，充分发挥想象力，孩子的认知能力也将得到提高。是不是很有意义呢~

我们再来看看阅读，阅读对于各个年龄段的人都是很重要的，对于儿童，在阅读中，儿童对于探索世界的兴趣会得到充分的刺激，长期的阅读会帮助儿童知识面变丰富，观察力，思考和提问能力，沟通表达能力和创造力都得以提升，对于儿童的学习能力的培养更是意义重大。本题谈论的是develop better skills and more creativity，显然无论是enjoyable activity还是reading都对儿童的各项skills的开发和创造力的开发有很大帮助，但是在写同意与否类的文章时，小伙伴们一定要有一个清晰的立场，中立可以，但是中立不好写，对词汇，语法和表意都有很高的要求，写不清楚容易被判断为立场不清而因此失去分数，所以建议大家选择一方，要不是reading要不就写enjoyable activity更有效，看自己哪边观点会的词多就写哪边即可~

好啦，咱们来看一篇精选的9分范文吧。

范文分析：

Parents throughout the world place spend time reading with their offspring（名词：子孙，后代-替换child）to prepare them for school where their literacy skills（the ability to read and write-读写能力）are further developed（你看这个further developed写的特别好-儿童在小时候，在parenting中会培养一部分的literacy skills而在schooling中，他们的技能是在被进一步提高-大家可以在自己的教育类文章中进行使用）;however,recent research suggests that focusing on reading at an early age can be detrimental（形容词：不利的，有害的）,and participating in fun activities would be far more beneficial.I am a strong advocate（支持者，昨天的文章中我们也给出了支持者的多种说法，此处请进行复习）of this approach,and the benefits of it will be covered in this essay.

（开头段：这个开头书写的较长，大家在自己写文章时开头段时不必写这么长，简要的引入话题+给出给人立场即可。本文开头段首句使用了分号连接前后两个分句，分号可以连接两个句子，但句子间必须要有明确清晰的逻辑关系）

A fundamental reason（根本原因，用fundamental引出，说明你接下来给出的理由一定是首要的，根本的，触及本质的）for this is that there is no biological age for reading,and pushing infants to acquire this skill before they are ready could have repercussions（名词：反向，后果，指不好的结果）.For example,in the UK,many boys arereluctant（形容词：不情愿的，勉强的）readers,possibly because of being forced to read,and this turned them off reading.By focusing on other activities and developing other skills such as creativity and imagination,when they are ready to read,they usually acquire this skill（好搭配：acquire the skill）rapidly.In addition,the importance of encouraging creativity and developing a child’s imagination must be acknowledged.Through play,youngsters(children替换)develop social and cognitive skills（认知能力）,for example,they are more likely to learn vocabulary through context rather than learning it from a book.

（勉强阅读可能会适得其反-举了UK的例子进行论证-反证如果做其它有创意的活动，可能会为以后阅读铺垫道路，以及创意活动和想象力的重要性）

Furthermore,play allows youngsters to mature emotionally,and gain self-confidence（好搭配）.There is no scientific research which suggests reading at a young age is essential for a child’s development.Moreover,evidence suggests the reverse(背面，反面，相反)is true.In Finland（大家看上一篇教育类和这一篇教育类中，涉及到儿童教育都使用了芬兰作为例子，芬兰的教育全球第 一，其优质的早教更是久负盛名,大家可以把这两篇文章中芬兰的例子背诵下来，在教育类的文章中进行使用）early years’education focuses on playing.Reading is only encouraged if a child shows and interest in developing this skill.This self-directed approach certainly does not result in Finnish school leavers falling behind their foreign counterparts.In fact,Finland was ranked the sixth best in the world in terms of reading.

（论证enjoyable activity可以帮助孩子思想成熟，增强其自信。举了芬兰的例子，这两个主体段写的好的地方就在于都各自举了具体的例子）

Despite being a supporter of this non-reading approach,I strongly recommend incorporating（包含，吸收）bedtime stories into a child’s daily routine.However,reading as a regular daytime activity should be swapped（交换）for something which allows the child to develop other skills.

（结尾陈述作者观点，自己是non-reading approach的支持者，但是也建议应该加入一些bedtime stories，立场清晰，观点明确）

好词：

1.Repercussion：可数名词：If an action or event has repercussions,it causes unpleasant things to happen sometime after the original action or event.后果

·搭配：形容词：considerable/important/serious/widespread/economic/political/social+repercussion

动词：have+repercussion

介词：repercussion+for sb/on sth(serious repercussions on productivity/major repercussions for the local community)

·用法：这个词大家可以用在环境类的题目中，写乱砍树木，乱扔垃圾，throw-away society等会产生repercussions。或者在经济发展的题目中，可以写：have serious repercussions for the local economy-对当地经济有很严重的影响

·例句：Because of money,we no longer see the direct repercussions our purchases have on other people and the environment.

·因为钱,我们再也看不到自己的购买对他人和环境的直接影响。

2.Reluctant：not willing to do something and therefore slow to do it不情愿的；勉强的

·搭配：

动词搭配：appear/feel/look/seem+reluctant

介词搭配：后面加to–reluctant to do sth

·例句：I was reluctant to leave.我不愿离开

Politicians are reluctant to cut taxes.政客们不愿意削减税收

3.Swap：动词=exchange：to give something and be given something else instead交换，交易

·搭配：动词：do/make/agree on a swap

·介词：Swap+between：swap sth between A and B

Swap+with：do a swap with sb

·例句：I’ll swap seat with you.我将和你换座位。