Nowadays,some parents put a lot of pressure on their children.Why is the reason for doing that?Is this a positive or negative development for the children?
翻译：
现在，有些家长给孩子太大的压力，他们这样做的原因是什么？这对于孩子而言是积极的还是消极的？
话题：教育类
题型：原因+影响（与剑15TEST1的大作文一致，为原因与利弊分析的混合题）
题目解析
首先咱们学两个词「parental pressure on kids」来自父母的压力，「pushing kids to excel」逼迫孩子变得出类拔萃，用于对本题关键词进行改写
不知道大家是否有过承受来自父母过多压力的经历
「没出息」「你们班同学都比你强」「练不好这段琴就不要吃饭」
父母一定不是与我们有仇，如此百般刁难多是出于希望我们未来过上「人上人」生活的憧憬
经历过社会的洗礼，对于成年后社会的不易了解的较为深刻，所以很多父母很焦虑
他们希望孩子未来是光明美好的，但也深知竞争残酷，因此打小就开始给孩子施压
envision（vt.想象；预想）a bright and happy future for their children
the knowledge of how competitive it is out there,makes them push their children to do well in every field.
这类家长不仅在学校学习上要求自己的孩子，在各个领域家长都希望自己的孩子有所成绩
School isn’t the only place where parents put pressure on kids.
Parents might also put lofty（adj.高的，崇高的）expectations on their kids to perform well in sports,music,theater,or other activities.
不知道大家怎么看待这样的管教方式，对于此，小编的想法就是一个词「problematic」
可以管，可以引导，可以有适当的压力但是过犹不及
每一件事情都想让孩子做好，每一天都安排的慢慢当当的，过于苛求对于孩子的心灵上的伤害是无法逆转的
即便初心是好的，来自父母的压力也绝 对不等于家长对孩子的关心
Though based on good intentions,parental pressure is often mistaken as care and can have serious consequences on children.
在过大压力的环境中长大后，很容易变得难以感受到幸福，没有自信，也没有安全感
Higher rates of mental illness：
Kids who feel like they’re under constant pressure can experience constant anxiety.High amounts of stress can also place children at a greater risk of developing depression.
Self-esteem problems：
Pushing kids to excel can damage their self-esteem.
The constant stress to perform interferes with children’s identity formation and causes them to feel like they’re not good enough—or even that they will never be good enough.
孩子天生就具有很强的学习能力，他们的好奇心和主动思考会推动自发的行动，
爱孩子是父母的本能，而能不能智慧、理性地爱孩子，确实很多父母急需的修行
范文分析
Its common to see the pressure on children is mounting as most modern parents think that this will fetch their children success.Factors attributing to this are diverse in nature and the question whether this is a positive or negative development remains in the minds of many even after a thorough discussion.
开头段：话题引入+下文引出
好词：
1.mounting：/形容词/上升，增加，加剧-increasing,often in a manner that causes or expresses worry(与growing同义）
我们可以说：mounting concern/tension/evidence/pressure与日剧增的关注/加剧的紧张感/越来越多的证据/更多的压力
例句：I cannot bear the mounting pressure.
2.fetch:/动词/拿，取，找到-to go to where somebody/something is and bring them/it back
比如我们可以说to fetch help/a doctor去寻找帮助/去找一个医生
例句：The inhabitants have to walk a mile to fetch water.
The first underlying reason behind this trend is the‘cut-throat competition’which was very unlikely in the past.For instance,many are seen struggling to meet both ends of their life.Another attributing factor is the intense desire to success in the parent’s minds.Many parents try to fulfill their dreams which they strived once in their life through their children.
原因段：给出了两条原因
句型：可以积累的说原因的句型：
Factors attributing to this are diverse
The first underlying reason behind this trend is
Another attributing factor is
Turning to the positive side of this trend,the increased success rate is the highlight.When more pressure is on the shoulders of a child,he is more likely to embrace success.Similarly this helps a student to concentrate in his‘road to success’.To be precise,when a student is made sacrifice his play and other entertainment activities for his studies,in one way it helps him to abstain from distractions.
好处段：观点-具体解释
好词组：
be more likely to do sth.更可能会...
The governments are more likely to provide funds instead of technological supports to them.
embrace success拥抱成功，拥有成功
abstain from distractions远离干扰
On the other hand,the worst challenge a student might face is the immense stress which affects a child’s normal psychological development and this in turn results in poor academic performance.Another drawback is the emotional maladjustment a child is prone to at a very young age,which may result in problems of interpersonal relationships with his parents.
弊端段
好词：
Immense：
/形容词/巨大的，无边的，等同于enormous
文中给的是巨大的压力，我们还可以说工作量巨大或者好处很多或者重要性很大都可以：
l There is still an immense amount of work to be done.
l The benefits are immense.
l a project of immense importance
Maladjustment：/名词/失衡，失调mental and emotional problems that lead to unacceptable behaviour
Prone：
/形容词/易于，有...倾向的likely to suffer from something or to do something bad
我们常用的词组是：prone to something注意后面一定要加不好的东西，
比如prone to injury易于受伤，prone to error易于犯错误
Working without a break makes you more prone to error.
After analyzing the matter in detail,it is understood that competition and intense desire to success are the primecatalysts behind this trend.However,it is hard for many to decide on whether it is a positive or negative development.
结尾段
好词
Prime：/形容词/主要的main;most important;basic
这个词咱们在雅思写作中非常好用
比如prime concern-最主要的关注点
The governments’prime concern is.....
再比如is of prime importance
The care of the environment is of prime importance.
