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20211106雅思大作文真题范文分析-社交媒体使用

作者:沈阳新航道 2021-11-22 16:47
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Nowadays many people use social media every day to keep in touch with others and news events.Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?


翻译:


如今,许多人每天都使用社交媒体与他人和新闻事件保持联系。你认为利大于弊吗?


话题:社会类媒体


类型:利弊分析类


题目分析


突然想到,对于利弊分析的题,万年不变可用的一句话:There are always two sides of everything.


说到这,感觉开头段顺着这句话都能写出来了哈哈>.<


There are always two sides of everything.The same goes for social media.Most people admire it as a revolutionary invention and some seem to take it as a negative impact on the society.I personally believe that....


横线处进行替换,标红标重处作为模版使用都是可以的,记笔记哦记笔记这里


好了回到题目分析....


本题3个关键点:social media,use everyday,keep in touch with others and news events


social media在书写时可以展开举出具体的例子比如Facebook,Twitter,Pinterest,instagram等等


Use everyday强调了使用普及与频率之高,因此此处我们在书写时不要只停留在描述如social media的便捷性等等上面,也要适当的分析过度依赖的弊端


keep in touch with others and news events点明了使用社交媒体的用途,在文中最好这两个方面都涉及到一点


接下来小编为大家分析一下利弊:


social media的优势很多,除了老生常谈的便捷性,还可以写它帮助连接了世界各地的人们


People from different countries are brought together through such sites as Facebook whereas(对比论证)before the development of technology and social networking sites,people rarely had the change to meet or communicate with anyone outside of their immediate circle or community.


而这一点其实是利也是弊,因为social media的世界过于丰富多彩,人们的注意力被大大吸引,每天都在用社交媒体而忽略了和身边人的沟通


Rather than individual people taking part in their local community,they are instead choosing to take more interest in people online.Consequently,the people within local communities are no longer forming close or supportive relationships.


另外很多人习惯用社交媒体去获取新闻信息并在平台上发表意见,而social media的一个好处就是reduce了communication barriers,让大家可以在一个更广的平台上与人沟通


With social networks we are able to communicate our thoughts and perceptions over different news topics with a large number of audiences,and raise our voice.


The sharing feature available on the social networks makes your opinion about any topic reach huge number of people.


但如上面一样的逻辑有利既有弊,这样的弊端就在于,很多人可能会分不清事实还是言论而被误导,并且这种畅所欲言的感觉容易让人愈发上瘾而更加脱离现实社会


The extensive use of social media can cause addiction to the users.Throughout their day,they feel to post something on their pages or check others posts as it has become an important part of our life.


Also,extreme usage of social media has reduced the level of human interaction.


好啦,以上,大家对于每天使用社交媒体这个事怎么看呢?


咱们来看看今天的范文吧


范文分析


The increasing use of(扣every day)social media in different ways(扣keep in touch with others and news events)is one of the fundamental changes that is irreversibly transforming society.This essay will delve into(钻研/挖掘)the positive and negative aspects of the phenomenon and outline which factors matter the most.


(开头段第 一句写的很好,对于题目要点很有技巧的进行了改写与概括;第二句话没有给出个人观点,但是给出了一句会outline which factors matter the most,在真实考试中,如果题目是Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?仍然建议大家开头就表态,不是必须的,但是会更保险一些)


The prominent advantage provided by social media platforms is instant gratification.At the click of a button,the world is on your doorstep.Being a social animal,the feeling of always being connected is the innate desire for all human beings.Through using social media such as Facebook or instagram every day,people upload pictures of their life-events,share their opinions,and voice their concerns.It is through these interactions that readers get to know about the latest trends and opinionated views of what is happening in the world.


(主体1段:好处段-集中讨论了人作为社会动物,需要每天感觉到与社会和外界的关联,这一点,社交媒体可以完美的辅助做到)


Conversely,the extensive use of social media is leading us to a significant chasm in everyday human interactions that is critical for the human race as a whole.People are content with scrolling through life updates of a friend/family member and getting influenced by fake news published on such websites.The conventional concept of meeting in person and celebrating together is dying its slow death.People have stopped reading news from the verified sources which strictly follow publishing regulations,but are blindly regarding news on Social media as the truth day after day.


(主体2段:弊端段,讲了社交媒体的弊端如容易有虚假信息,同时也点明了每天使用,频繁使用会造成传统交流方式的极大减少)


In conclusion,it is fair to say that the internet and Social media platforms have undoubtedly provided a common ground for people to stay connected.Still,at the same time,it has also given rise to isolation and fake news.It is therefore imperative that people using these websites do so with a pinch of salt as the cons outweigh the pros to a fair extent.


(with a pinch of salt:有所保留,留有余地)


(结尾段:第 一句总结好处,第二句总结弊端,第三句给出自己立场)


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