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2023年5月8日雅思作文题目:高等教育是成功的最佳途径吗?
Somepeopleagreethatthebestwaytobecomesuccessfulinlifeistogettheuniversityeducation,whileothersdisagreeandreckonthatnowadaysitisnolongertrue.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.
高分范文及分析
Introduction
Inmostcases,manypeoplearguethatthemostcrucialfactorofsuccessistoreceivetertiaryeducation,whilerecentlysomeregardthisargumentasindefensiblesincethingshavechanged.Personally,thekeytothisdebateliesinthedefinitionof“successful”.
解析
看似双方都在讨论问题类型,但仔细看看观点:一方面是thebestway,另一方面是nowadaysnolonger,两边都有极端的词语,观点互斥。这个问题其实是一个单一的主题,讨论“高等教育是否是成功的最好方式”。问题有点难。基于现实描述,高等教育确实是目前最好的方式,但要论证best并不容易。可以从抽象术语successful入手,定义不同,立场不同。
老题新改,其他相关主题:Somepeoplebelievethatstudyinginacollegeoruniversityisthebestwayforstudentstopreparefortheirfuturecareer.Othersthinktheyshouldleaveschoolassoonaspossibletodeveloptheircareerthroughworkexperience.Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.(2013.03.09)Somepeoplebelievethatacademicqualificationsalwaysbringsuccess,whileothersdisagree.Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.(2021.02.25)
tertiaryadj.(继初等、中等教育之后)高等教育、高等教育、高等教育、高等教育
indefensibleadj.毫无根据的
Body1
Traditionally,successisdefinedaswinninghonourabledistinctionsinthedomainsrelatedtoscientificresearchoracademia,whichwillfurthersecurehighreputationandsocialstatus.Inthiscase,academicqualificationsareamust.Assuchhonorarytitlesarefewandfarbetweenandthushardtocomeby,thecompetitionforthefewpositionsavailableeachyearisextremelyintensegiventheseaofapplicantsapplying.Tohaveanedgeovertheircounterparts,thoseapplicantsarerequiredtoobtaincertainresearchfindingsandwinapprovalofscholarsinrelevantfields.Tothisend,highereducationisthemostfundamentalbutvitalwaytopolishtheirknowledge.Evenpragmaticjobslikedoctorsornursesalsoaskforafirmtheoreticalfoundation.
解析
成功定义为:在科研相关行业获得高荣誉称号,享有一定的声誉和社会地位,因此高等教育是最好和必要的方式。
distinctionn.殊勋;荣誉称号
securevt.造成;获得
comebyv.获得
intenseadj.(活动)紧张、用心、激烈
givenprep.考虑到
havedeover比.
counterpartn.相应的人(或物);对手方
为了达到这个目的,tothisend
polishvt.打磨;润色
Body2
However,inthefieldsirrelevanttoacademiccircles,beingsuccessfulisinnoneedofuniversityeducationforthereasonthattheoreticalknowledgeisnolongertheprerequisite.Sportsmencanserveasacompellingexample.Forthesakeofattainingprizesinbothnationalandinternationalgames,swimmersshouldlearnhowtospeeduptheirstrokesandadjustbreathsundersystematictrainingwithscientificinstructioninsteadofacquiringtheknowledgeregardinghowmusclesandlungsfunction.Itisacommonplaceth
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