竞争力是好是坏？Competitiveness is considered to be an important quality for people in many societies.下面由新航道的沈阳雅思培训小编为您解答！

　　How does it affect individuals?

　　Is it a positive or negative trend?

　　高分范文及分析

　　01、Being competitive is an arguably desirable quality. It could go either way on both the individual level and the level of society.

　　* 开头段落可以三言两语结束，有话留在body部分。

　　* 选词时，不要过度思考，意思到了就可以了，加快写作过程，思考也留在body部分。

　　* 造句时，不要迷恋长时间，还是那个原则：时间和脑力留给body部分。

　　02、In the good way, competitiveness evokes one’s yearning for wealth and fame. Being competitive, the one is strong-willed, conscientious and resilient, thus having the traits crucial to achieving success. Also, the individual may be charismatic because he or she can imbue people with enthusiasm and energy. On the other hand, things may go the other way: not only does it plague an individual with desires that are beyond his or her ability, being competitive may also be unfavorable for having a rapport with other people. People usually prefer an amiable colleague or classmate, who is considered approachable and relaxing, and they are probably estranged from a competitive individual, who may be considered unfriendly and stressful.解析

　　* body部分段回应一个问题。

　　* 选词：动词和修饰词是核心。这一段中值得考虑的单词被标记出来，看看它们是否主要是动词和修饰词。这两个单词的表达功能（描述或评价）最强，是单词的关键。

　　* 造句:句子的多样性，主要是状语的多样性(动词分词的前后状语和状语从句)。当然会有两种特殊的句型(比如倒装)。当然，定语也有多种方式(从句和句子后面)。

　　* 文脉：由于开头段落中提到的两种情况（It could go either way），因此，本段的结构可以非常简单：分别讨论两种情况。注：In the good way和On the other hand这两个句子很重要。它们提醒读者本段内容的划分。这通常被称为“逻辑连接词”，是评分的关键点之一。

　　03、Sameasitistoanindividual,competitiveness,onthescaleofasociety,canalsobebothadvantageousanddisadvantageous.On one hand,asocietymaythereforenurtureacourageousandaspiringnationthatmayconqueranyhardship.TheChinesearesuchanation,anationthatneveryieldstoanydifficulties.Beingcompetitivehasgotthemoutofsomanypredicamentsthroughouthistory.On the other hand,ifcompetitivenessgoestheotherwayandbecomesexcess.Therecanhardlybealtruisminasociety,and,instead,astowiniseveryindividual’s only purpose, a society can be apathetic or even aggressive.解析

　　* body部分第二段回应第二个问题。

　　* 选词:标准和原则同上段。注意:不要在没有评价或描述的地方用脑筋用词。你认为考官会关心那些地方的单词吗？不太可能。

　　* 造句:标准和原则与前一段相同。在这一段中，状语有不同的方式(修改句子外置，介宾短语插入)。

　　* 文脉：本段也可分别讨论两种情况。注：On one hand和On the other hand这两个句子很重要。更重要的是，这段句子是用来连接这段和最后一段的，所以Same as it is to an individual 这句话很重要：它在结构和内容上起着连接上下文的作用，在语法现象上有一种形式的状语。

　　04、An individual can be driven by the desire to win and make accomplishments, or the individual gets trapped in the mindset and loses his or her calm. Likewise, this dichotomy also applies to societies.解析

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