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雅思考官喜欢写高分句型案例分享

作者:沈阳新航道 2024-03-25 10:15
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  雅思考官喜欢分享高分句型的写作案例。事实上,剑桥考官的范文中复杂句子总数很少。大多数时候,简单的句子都是华丽的包装,雅思考官的评价标准是最后一个 GRA (grammatical range and accuracy),明确考察学生写英语句子的多样性和准确性,即测试考生灵活运用简单句子和复杂句子的能力。下面由新航道的沈阳雅思培训小编为您解答!


  中国考生也知道句子表达应该多样化,但很难理解如何使他们的句子丰富多样。因此,一般的句子类型相对单一。当涉及到复杂的结构时,他们经常积累各种从句,好像除了从句没有其他复杂的结构可以写。事实上,在剑桥考官的模型中,复杂句子的总数很少,大多数时候是简单句子的华丽包装,今天看看考官喜欢什么样的“高分句子类型”,以及你想象的是否有差距!


  1.状语外置


  所谓状语外置,就是把状语(副词、介词短语、分词、不定式)放在句首。考官经常使用这种句法结构,但很多考生没有想法。这种句型通过一堆长句中的一个小短语,可以让句子产生长短结合的紧凑感。案例如下:


  1)Unfortunately, professionals from other fields who make a much greater contribution to human society, are paid so much less that it is hard to disagree with the statement.


  2)Obviously, education systems are based on the belief that all children can effectively be taught to acquire different skills.


  3)Like self-awareness, this is also very difficult to achieve, but I think these are the two factors that may be most important for achieving happiness.


  4)As a result of media attention, sports professionals in my country have become stars and celebrities.


  5)With the political will, such measures could really reduce the amount of rubbish we produce.

 

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  2.句中插入句子


  与状语外置类似,在长句中间插入一个小短语,可以使句子读起来更加轻松灵活。考官案例如下:


  1)This will affect the job market, which, after all, is a key target in any economic plan.


  2)Sports stars and pop stars, for example, are soon replaced by the neat younger, more energetic generation.


  3)So overall, I believe that, attending schools from a young age is good for most children.


  4)Universities, when it is functioning well, should offer both theoretical knowledge as well as professional training


  3.倒装句


  考生已经学会了这种语法现象,但往往在作文中忘记或没有使用概念。先看两个例子:


  1 )Parents should spend time on their children. They should also communicate with them.


  2 )We can never lose sight of the significance of education.


  这两句话没有错,但都很单调平淡,如果用倒装,效果就不一样了。句子可以使用not。 only t also 将句型改写为倒装句:Not only should parents spent time on their children, they are also advised to interact with them.


  第二句可以提前否定词,强调突出“不容忽视”。


  On no account/by no means/ in no way/never can we lose sight of the significance of education.


  考官范文中倒装的例子并不多,主要表现在以下几种情况下:


  1)Only in this way can this problem be effectively solved.


  2)We can see that not only are there very large differences between these economies-s, but that these gaps are widening.


  3)Strange as it may seem, parents’ attention sometimes hinders students’academic development.


  4)Equally important to success in learning a foreign language is constant attention to details.


  在日常语言积累和雅思写作练习中,考生建议多遵循这些固定句型,并在文章中穿插1-2个倒装句。看到这里,不难看出,在考官的范文和剑桥官方书后的高分范文中,各种复杂的句型并不是高分的标准。最重要的是把握文章的整体,合理运用各种句型,保证文章的思路和流畅性。当然,正确的句法结构也是非常重要的评价标准之一!


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