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雅思考试雅思作文真题参考范文

作者:沈阳新航道 2024-04-11 10:28
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  有钱后最好的事就是有机会帮助别人吗?下面由新航道的沈阳雅思培训小编为您解答!


  Some people think the best thing about being rich is that it gives an opportunity to help other people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?


  解析&读题


  主题:社会


  问题类型:什么程度上同意还是不同意?


  关键词:the most important thing   being rich   help other people


  需要讨论的观点:有钱后最好的事就是有机会帮助别人吗?


  建议思路:边倒

 

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  那么,富有之后最重要的事情是什么呢?是享受还是帮助别人?从正能量的角度来看,我们肯定会同意富有之后最好的事情就是帮助别人。但是如何论证这个观点呢?唐老师认为我们可以从两个方面来选择:第一,有钱之后帮助别人,可以给我们带来更多的幸福和成就感;但也有一个条件,那就是只有帮助真正想帮助的人,而不是被媒体或舆论逼迫帮助别人,才能带来真正的幸福。同时,帮助别人带来的幸福不一定与给别人捐多少钱成正比。


  因此,唐老师的想法是:首先指出观点(帮助别人在富有后给我们带来幸福),然后证明能给我们带来幸福的是帮助正确的人,或者因为我们完全认识到的原因。这种写作不仅围绕着主题的要求,而且也显得丰富和客观。你是怎么写的?


  7分范文


  If being rich is being happy, can helping others be a super-happiness? The resounding answer is yes. The rich would feel even a higher degree of happiness, particularly when they are giving for causes that they are passionate about.


  Generally, those who are happiest are those who give the most to others, according to ancient wisdom and new research. It makes conventional sense that helping other people in need is a path to everlasting happiness. As the Chinese saying goes: “If you want happiness for an hour, take a nap. If you want happiness for a lifetime, help somebody.” Scientific experiments also show that altruism, or selfless concern for the well-being of others, is hard-wired in the brain, and it is pleasurable. In view of all this information, helping others may be just the secret to living a life that is both happy and meaningful.


  However, it is important to remember that helping others does not always make the rich feel the happiness they deserve. In some cases, giving can make the rich feel taken advantage of, even though it is the right thing to do. Therefore, to be really happy in helping others, the rich should choose the causes they love. Meanwhile, giving to a cause that specifies where their money is going can lead to a positive feeling of everlasting happiness rather than a negative feeling of resentment. Understandably, it is not only how much money they give, but also how much love they put into giving.


  In giving, rich people can choose the causes that fit them to achieve a high degree of happiness. The best thing the rich can do with their money, therefore, is not just being able to help others, or even how much they can help, but being able to help for the right causes.


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